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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2003-09-24 05:06 PM

This slant of light
From here seems more
The glow
Of your face fresh scrubbed
And shining from the moments we spent
In our own splendid shine

I bathe myself in it
Trying to capture the essence of a world
Backlit to perfection until the details
Stand alone

Each a tightly held bit
Of some unknown explore with textured
Colors one feels in hand
As if nibs of silken clothe were
Slid across the skin
And senses expand

I hear the sounds of green
In counter point to red
Sing across my eyes

As this the new of season
Finds it’s own begin

I would grieve the days
Since we touched
But my heart will not beat
Enough to hold all the nights
That left me cold

For winter comes

And I am just a man
Seeking this
The perfect light
To see you in

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-09-24 05:07 PM

I enjoy the word "backlight"...
it brings such a serene feel
to sepia...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-09-24 05:13 PM

Excellent poet sir...
As always...I sit in awe.
~Hugs YOU!~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-09-24 05:16 PM

"I would grieve the days
Since we touched
But my heart will not beat
Enough to hold all the nights
That left me cold

For winter comes

And I am just a man
Seeking this
The perfect light
To see you in"

You know, makes me think of a time I was touched by a gentle man such the one you write about...*sigh*

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2003-09-24 05:51 PM

'I bathe myself in it' ---yes, I've done that. good one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2003-09-24 08:21 PM

OH...the last 4 lines jumped out at me. How could anyone who writes with such depth of feeling be 'just a man'? Amazing Ron.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-09-24 08:29 PM

(smiles) Oh Ron, I love the thought of shining in the light, sweet friend, this is beautiful and may your spirit always find a shade of color to radiate in! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2003-09-24 08:40 PM

Ron

"And I am just a man
Seeking this
The perfect light
To see you in"

I think you have the magic touch with this one. Hugs!

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

8 posted 2003-09-24 09:44 PM

You aren't just a man, but as man full of heart and depth to his soul that would illuminate anyone's inner spirit.

Crystal

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

9 posted 2003-09-24 09:48 PM

Simply beautiful, Ron -- your technique and writes always inspire me with thought and vision.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

10 posted 2003-09-24 10:36 PM

Gotta go with the crowd on this one Ron

A beauty!

Ed

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2003-10-04 04:54 PM

Oh...so beautiful, Ron...love this.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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