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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2003-09-24 04:10 PM




How can the moon smile
half shine when what makes
it whole has faded into
obscurity?

I am in need of lunar's
secret for my half too
has gone into hiding
Where loneliness
Ponders in tiers...


~Tier


© Copyright 2003 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-09-24 04:27 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh R.T, I send many angel hugs your way, sweet friend, I don't believe anyone but God can answer that, but I truly believe that just like the moon cycles, soon your heart will be full of true happiness forever and behind all the black velvet, it'll always be full forever! (kiss on cheek) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet R.T, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Dark Angel
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2 posted 2003-09-24 04:50 PM


Oh this is sad, beautifully penned though.

Tier

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-09-24 04:50 PM



Gads gal...how deep do you want to go
with this one?

Oh.  THAT deep.



Thank you.

Tiersdin
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4 posted 2003-09-24 05:02 PM


Thank you everyone for your kind comments. This poem was penned a good while ago and I've only just found it.  Nice to know it still conveys my feelings.

*Hugs*

~Tier

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-09-25 03:11 PM


Tier -
amazing use of metaphors here
and no one should
cause such a beauty
a single tier
*smile*
xxoo

LeeJ
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6 posted 2003-09-25 03:48 PM


beautifully written, there is solence in even the tears....
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7 posted 2003-09-25 04:03 PM


Tier, though sad, this is a beautiful poem.
Hugs  
Ethel

wranx
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8 posted 2003-09-26 12:54 PM


Wonderfully sad! (If such a thing is possible)

100% Tiersdin, no matter how old it is...

Ed

angelblueyes
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9 posted 2003-09-26 01:24 AM


This aches deeply , but it has the touch of your heart and soul.Many angel hugs sent to you.
Crystal

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10 posted 2003-09-27 03:49 AM


I go there too, tiers~
There are days I can't stand the color blue!!!  

And here I am dressed in turquoise tonight!  


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11 posted 2003-09-27 09:54 AM


The moon whispers..."you are the secret."
And you know.


This is beautiful.

Eric

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12 posted 2003-09-27 10:38 AM


this is absolutely beautiful and completely understandable...

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

n2dmystic
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13 posted 2003-09-27 11:51 AM


it's all been said, except that I liked this very much.  beautiful, sad.  good write.  Peace, Joe

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