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heartlbroken..giv it a chance :(
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heartlbroken..giv it a chance :( |
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bashlovesemma Junior Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 25 |
Hi its Sean, im 16, and heartbroken... i hope this isnt to bad to your guys/girls  cos i know ya'll are great poems writers.... i just wana express my feelin's to... i cant talk about my feelings i just write..it is much easier to express your feelings with poems then tell anyone... Blown it How can I sleep tonight? You’re in my Heart and Thought, How can I survive without your touch? You’re constantly on my mind, You know how I’m feeling, You’re the one that keeps me breathing I miss you everyday we’re apart, When you call it feels like the beginning of a brand new start, Katie you’re the one I want and need, I’ve been a fool and now I’m paying the price, I’ve never been this unhappy, I’m trying to make this snappy I’ve gone and lost my one true friend I have so many feelings for you, Too many to say, But my feelings for you are so strong, I love you with all my heart, but when we’re apart, My heart isn’t one, When we are together, There are things I will never forget But there are many things I truly regret Everyday when I’m lying in my bed I hear your voice in my head Thinking of all the things I could have done, And all the things I should have said I’m hoping to make it up to you. But I don’t know what to do So please tell me what to say? Because I need a chance to change Don’t you care enough to try? I’m praying for a life-line. By, Sean - thought would be appreciated thanks... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hey this is pretty good. 16 you say? you got potential. keep writing her poems even if you never show them to her |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
writing what we feel and what we are going through is at times the best therapy we can find... you have no reason to feel you are not good enough or that the things you might offer here are in some way going to be judged harshly. You will find, the things you write are recognized by some more than others as they too may relate to the experience or the hurt you speak of. Others, may not... that is true of all of us here. Sometimes words and poems speak to us and we feel we simply must say something, others the words are read and while the reader might say something, they don't know how, or what to say.. so, don't get down on yourself..or discouraged.. just keep writing..and keep posting... but above all.. read.. read some of the good poets here... it won't take you long to see who you relate to..and learn from them the ways they express and write the things inside them.. you'll find when it comes to writing your own thoughts and feeling it is easier... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What Walt and Cpat said... listen to them. They'll show you the ropes. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yep, what Walt, Capt. Ron, and Sunshine said......  And, just keep writing your feelings from your heart. That's all I know to do. By the way, this poem was very touching and heart-felt. Thanks for sharing it with us. Hugs to you,  Ethel |
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bashlovesemma Junior Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 25 |
Wayoutwalt – yeah im 16, and thanks Cpat Hair – I understand.. thanks also Sunshine – thanks but what do you mean? ‘show me the ropes’? Garysgirl – thank you for your words. Its no problem, I have much more, sometimes im a little embarrassed to let people know how I feel.. Sean |
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