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Insomniac Cat
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since 2003-09-23
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The Land of the Dadaists

0 posted 2003-09-24 12:17 PM



I was kidney stoned, driving home on a Friday afternoon
I put Jonny in the green basket out in the hall
Nothing is funnier than four ugly men sitting on a wall
Each holding a rubber chicken

Do you feel restless? Slowed down?
Tried? Down on yourself?
Suffer from poor concentration?
Depressed mood? Change in appetite?
Diminished interest in activities?
Poor sleep habits?
If you have two more of these symptoms…
Be your beautiful self

The beast is back!
I’m pissed and horny but getting along
You don’t know me
I wore the Shark Expedition shirt
And a bad haircut

Elation—Depression
More American than ordinary men and women
Don’t let them psyche you out!
You can take it with you
You never have to die

Maturing? Serious thought! Time for counseling
It’s easy to be a happy timer
Come and get it, sure to satisfy
Are you afraid to be alone? Don’t laugh!
Galileo was wrong, you’ll be hooked for life

Enjoy the strange
Play the uncanny
Drink the incredible
Strip naked
Talk to strangers
Learn to let go
Have a drink before noon
Stay up late
Wake the dead

It’s no fun to say goodbye

© Copyright 2003 Insomniac Cat - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2003-09-24 12:45 PM


Many stark images in this...and the last line gave me chills.  I wish you well.
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 2003-09-24 05:01 PM


I enjoyed this ICat very much and yes that last line definitely gave me chills too. I hope all is well.

will be looking out for more from you.

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2003-09-24 11:24 PM


Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Insomniac Cat
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since 2003-09-23
Posts 69
The Land of the Dadaists
4 posted 2003-09-25 07:53 AM


Thanks guys, all is well indeed.  
QjQ
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5 posted 2003-09-25 05:53 PM


enjoyed your write,,,

                                                       

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