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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-09-24 08:03 AM





The rain drops whispering against the
window in rhythm ~ leaves me scantly
mesmerized ~ I see silhouettes dancing
as lightning flashes through  windows
against bare walls ~and with murmurs
of distant thunder serenading me into
tranquil feelings ~  I stare blindly at the
empty picture frame hanging over the
fireplace ~  while the flickering logs slowly
turn to ash ~ an image appears in the
empty frame ~ but my vision is clouded
by tears of sadness ~ as my thoughts
drift into memory's of my last rendezvous
with love

                                        

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vlraynes
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1 posted 2003-09-24 08:05 AM



I'd like some of that rain please...

This is lovely, Glenn...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-09-24 08:07 AM


QjQ
Well done enjoyed the read.

Bonnie j
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3 posted 2003-09-24 08:09 AM


Morning Mr.Q
We are standing beside you as you gaze at that empty picture frame giving you
courage and strength.
See Ya Bon-Bon

Margherita
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4 posted 2003-09-24 08:31 AM


Beautiful, melancholic write.
Love, Margherita

SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-09-24 09:09 AM


But, but, Q that just shouldn't be. :'( Sad.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

LeeJ
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6 posted 2003-09-24 09:31 AM


beautiful bitter sweet poem, kind sir...hugs and wishes for the sunshine to warm you sweet heart....hiya Q...and good morning
Mystic One
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7 posted 2003-09-24 11:24 AM


Yes Nice
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8 posted 2003-09-24 01:42 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Glenn, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I haven't had true love yet and seeing beautiful paintings of lovers too makes me feel a bit sad and a bit envious too, wondering what it would feel like to be loved in return! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, your heart is so deserving of happiness forever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Glenn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-09-24 07:23 PM


Nice writing...James
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10 posted 2003-09-24 09:09 PM


Glenn, this is very good writing.
I really enjoyed reading this.
Hugs  
Ethel

angelblueyes
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11 posted 2003-09-24 09:38 PM


A very heartfelt write.My spirit is with you in your moments of sadness and if that doesn't work then I'll just come tickle you.hehehehehehe.
Crystal

Sunshine
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12 posted 2003-09-24 09:41 PM



A most beautiful
remembrance...sad, but
enlightening...

JilGirl
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13 posted 2003-09-26 12:53 PM


Perhaps she'll come knocking at your door again(?)

There's a happy ending after the tears!

Blessings!
Shirl

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

Mystic One
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14 posted 2003-09-26 02:20 AM


Yes
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