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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-24 07:50 AM


Hour Of The Spell

meet me at sundown
it is the special moment
of the hour that
the dimming will fall
an eve of velvet
to be covered
in the vapor
of softened dusk
where horizons defuse
changing all time
do not decline
this special invitation
and I shall
bring you dawn


"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2003-09-24 07:52 AM



This is gorgeous, Helen...I love it.

Hugs to you, friend...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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Ohio
2 posted 2003-09-24 08:00 AM


What a beautiful picture you have painted.
After we watch dawn dance with the sun and all the colors of the rainbow we can sit and watch dusk in all his glory.
Love Bon-Bon

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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3 posted 2003-09-24 08:00 AM


this is just a absolutely terrific write,,,

                                        

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2003-09-24 08:02 AM


1slick_lady
Alot of implications. LOL enjoyed

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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Calif.
5 posted 2003-09-24 09:27 AM


this is beautiful...

~~ Connie ~~

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