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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-09-24 07:30 AM


Banalities Reality

I’ve reached the stage, banality
The shawl of weights, reality
And with arthritic hands I weave
The only segments I believe

I believe the black in light
The multi color seed of white
The plus and minus of our mind
The nimbus of a life of find

I work within a sense of five
It is the motor of my drive
It is the rind that binds the goal
It is the spirit of my soul

I cannot lift myself above
The power of the sense of love
It is the only sense of plus
That holds together all of us.

I feed upon this honeys vamp
To me it is Aladdin’s lamp



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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2003-09-24 07:34 AM



"I cannot lift myself above
The power of the sense of love
It is the only sense of plus
That holds together all of us.

I feed upon this honeys vamp
To me it is Aladdin’s lamp"


YES...so very, very true.

I love this, Sy...the ALL of it...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-24-2003 07:37 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-09-24 07:36 AM


vlraynes

Bonnie j
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3 posted 2003-09-24 08:04 AM


With arthritic hands you weave a tapestry of beauty. Thanks you for sharing.
See Ya Bon-Bon

QjQ
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4 posted 2003-09-24 08:06 AM


enjoyed the read,,,,

                                        

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-09-24 08:08 AM


Bonnie,
Thank you Bon Bon.

QjQ
Thank you for the read.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-09-24 09:09 AM


Beautiful morning read Sy!
Would a cup of warm tea help those hands?
Because your mind is packed full of wonderful words to share with us..
You take care and have a wonderful day!
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-09-24 09:22 AM


Nancy,
After your tea the day will be wonderful.

LeeJ
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8 posted 2003-09-24 09:34 AM


you are the king of Genies!
Good good morning to ya and wihing you a happy day!  hugs and smiles

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2003-09-24 09:36 AM


I believe the black in light
The multi color seed of white
The plus and minus of our mind
The nimbus of a life of find

Yes Sey! Exactly.  Ya know, this piece just
rocks!  Loved it...hugs...

Sunshine
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10 posted 2003-09-24 09:42 AM



You know, they say the folks that continue to interact mentally with others, and keep up communication processes, live longer and longer and longer...

You ready for the next 30 years, Sy?  

We are!  

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-09-24 11:19 AM


LeeJ,
Thank you dear.

Gentle Spirit
Sweet reply, thank you.

Sunshine
As long as you keep shinning I'm ready.

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