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The Difference
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The Difference |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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The Difference When love is but a fantasy that brings you to your knees And dreams are the foundation for your greatest memories When anything seems better than your own realities Just keep believing - see the endless possibilities When thoughts of non-existence find a birthplace in your head And all that's found within your heart is misery and dread When no one hears the lonely cries and words are left unsaid Remember that tomorrow's sun is rising just ahead When skies grow dark and angry with the flash of lightning's hand And thunder roars it's savage voice in lack of understand When rain begins it's beating with the force of reprimand Denuded, dance within it's wrath - your moment to command Though yesterday is over, with the morning comes a choice So make the diff'rence - give yourself a reason to rejoice ~Vicky L. Raynes When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-25-2003 12:18 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
beautifull penning, Lady Poetess,,,, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
YAY! 'tis beautiful Vicky. Maree  fate is not just |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wonderful!  |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
"Though yesterday is over, with the morning comes a choice So make the diff'rence - give yourself a reason to rejoice" The past is over and you are making me rejoice. Thank you so much. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Vic - another beauty . . . and I am so proud of you have I told you this? When rain begins it's beating with the force of reprimand Denuded, dance within it's wrath - your moment to command Yes, dance as if the world was yours for the taking because . . truly, it is Love you, my sis I do I do xxoo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vlraynes An inspirational poem, rnjoyed. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
A refreshing thought for a fresh new morning. Thanks, melton |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Vicky, I hope you rejoice in knowing how much of a difference you make, to all of us! “When no one hears the lonely cries and words are left unsaid Remember that tomorrow's sun is rising just ahead” Things that one can depend on, can be of great comfort. Like the dawn of a new day. And, the optimistic compassion in your heart... Genuinely Inspiring! Richy |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, your poetry always has such compassion and grace to it and soars on angel wings to many who need a helping hand or shoulder! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friernd, you deserve extra special angel hugs for this write, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ SO totally beautiful~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky...So beautifully inspiring! Thank you for this poem. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Lady, you're awesome Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Vicky, I hope you know you touch the hearts of many. Crystal |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
So very lovely, full of optimism and hope. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Though yesterday is over, with the morning comes a choice So make the diff'rence - give yourself a reason to rejoice Vicky, I love the faith and hope that I feel in this beautiful poem. I love the way you are able to express your feelings.Remember, my friend, sometimes things change when we least expect them to. Thanks for being you, Vicky. You are a special person.  Hugs Ethel |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
crushed me with the first line... revived me by the last... awesome...much enjoyed... hugs, g "Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes, all the difference Ed |
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