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Suetang
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0 posted 2003-09-24 01:01 AM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

In memory of my beloved father......


I stand alone beneath the moon
I'm bathed in its milky glow
I search high up in the heavens
Hoping a sign from you might show

I spy the brightest star
And I know this must be you
You shine brightly down on me
From high above the blue

I write my thoughts on paper
And I hope that you can see
The intensity of my feelings
And how much you meant to me

Heaven's diamond studded blanket
Brings me comfort every night
While you remain inside my memory
Of your love, I'll not lose sight

* * *

"We are all angels with only one wing.....
we can fly only by embracing each other"



I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (09-24-2003 06:01 PM).]

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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-09-24 05:29 AM


Very nice thoughts and i'm sure hes looking down at this wonderful write,,

My feelings are with you,,,

                                        

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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2 posted 2003-09-24 05:37 AM



This is beautiful, Sue...
and such a loving tribute to your dad.

Hugs to you, my friend,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Margherita
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3 posted 2003-09-24 06:32 AM


Touchingly beautiful!
Your love is deeply felt.
Love, Margherita

Margherita
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4 posted 2003-09-24 06:45 AM


Oops, I see I am replying in doubles ...

Hugs and smiles!
Margherita

[This message has been edited by Margherita (09-24-2003 06:47 AM).]

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
5 posted 2003-09-24 08:40 AM


Oh my Sue, you do touch my soul:

"We are all angels with only one wing.....
we can fly only by embracing each other"

that we rae, we are
and this reminded me of my very own
good thoughts indeed
beautiful, as always
thank you
xxoo


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6 posted 2003-09-24 01:22 PM




(big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I know deep down with all my heart that your father is always guiding you from up above and is smiling reading every word you write of romantic, compassionate poetry and the gorgeous poetry you dedicate to him and he will always be happily blessed to have you as his daughter forever as you will always be daddy's little girl! (wipes tears) You and your father are both angels, sweet friend, this is absolutely beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

P.S: I got your e-mail and will happily add my verses to the poem today or tomorrow, yay!

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2003-09-24 01:48 PM


SueTang~
Such beautifully gentle thoughts from the heart of a daughter~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

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