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noah j
Member

since 2003-03-05

Posts 82
on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair

0 posted 2003-09-23 07:46 PM

you stopped, tried to talk
my bottle of jack interrupted you
i swear i tried to hear you
but the voice of the captain
drowned you out

i am one man
doing all i can
in an endless cycle
trying to escape

the only people for me are the mad ones-mad to live, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at once--jack kerouac

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

1 posted 2003-09-23 08:53 PM

So that man sees the cycle
of doing all he can to escape.
Is he afraid to have some faith,
does he fear the good things?
Thinks he's unworthy? Undeserving?
Maybe he could just say a prayer.
A simple prayer,
that someone out there,
will care.
~K~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-09-23 09:01 PM

If you really want to change......all you have to do is ask and then make the effort to try. Good write & good luck. Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-09-23 09:34 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Just hear your conscience, give your chest a big push, smash that bottle on the ground, and declare "I CAN!" (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, I wish you the strength as I do to many others, God Bless You, you can do it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Noah, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-09-23 10:38 PM

Jack will do that to you. He's doing that to me at this very minute.

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PouringJewels
Member

since 2003-09-18

Posts 158
Maryland

5 posted 2003-09-24 05:17 AM

Brown booze is not for you met too many angered souls in my job ease up your wonderful

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