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Richy
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0 posted 2003-09-23 06:47 PM




For Sue (littlewing),

WE belong to you


I wish that we could help you
through the perils of this plight
I wish that we could rid the pain
that keeps you up at night

I wish that we could let you
feel the happiness you bring
I wish that you could hear the
music that your heart can sing

The paths we choose to follow
can make anyone unsure
But your ideals I’m certain
are compassionate and pure

You shouldn’t feel you don’t
deserve the sun light shining through
I doubt that it would even rise
if it were not for you

You have an inner beauty that’s
compassionate and warm
Your have an aura that could
lead us through the darkest storm

Your timeless gentle spirit
flows likes dreams upon the wind
Your presence is the place where
light and happiness begins

Your selfless care of others
are the traits that you impart
Your smile is a miracle that
captivates the heart

So please believe us when we
tell you what you feel is wrong
You always have and always
will, to all of us belong


Richy


[This message has been edited by Richy (09-23-2003 07:49 PM).]

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-09-23 06:56 PM


How very beautiful Richy!
I'm sure Sue will love this.
I know I did!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2003-09-23 07:22 PM


Richy~

This is so sweet and true!

Susan

vlraynes
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3 posted 2003-09-23 07:29 PM



Oh...Richy...this is absolutely beautiful,
and you have described her perfectly...

You are a sweetheart.  

Hugs to you, friend...


And, Sue?...what Richy said...smile...
Love you, sis...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2003-09-23 07:33 PM


Your selfless care of others
are the traits that you impart
Your smile is a miracle that
captivates the heart


Now this captures our Sue perfectly, what a wonderful write you honor her with.  Indeed a beautifully gentle poem.  *s*

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2003-09-23 07:35 PM


Your selfless care of others
are the traits that you impart
Your smile is a miracle that
captivates the heart

Ain't it the truth though~
This was such a nice tribute
to a very special lady.
But, methinks she's gonna be just fine,
after all, she's got love on her side!  


Patricia
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6 posted 2003-09-23 07:39 PM


Very lovely, and so, so true.  I haven't been able to visit Passions much lately...caught up in work and family.  But I am so glad to read you again.  Littlewing will love this, I'm sure.

Patricia

SharaRose
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7 posted 2003-09-23 07:57 PM


She is a sweetie pie...that's for sure!!!! The best!!! One of God's little messengers!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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8 posted 2003-09-23 09:20 PM




(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, God Bless You, sweet friend, Sue is a very special friend to us all and I sure want her to always see how loving and wonderful she is and never deny that! (big hugggsssssss) This is full of so much good karma, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Richy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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9 posted 2003-09-23 11:05 PM


Sun comes...that's the important thing...and what a beautiful way to give the wish.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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littlewing
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10 posted 2003-09-24 04:58 AM


Richy . . .
you have always had the most beautiful
heartfelt words for me
but this?
Oh I truly needed this, I did  
I am honored that you see me like this
that you care enough to lend your hand
and that you paint me such lines
of hope . . .

In that darkness, you are the light
*smile*
an honor, sir
and I am grateful for you
for everyone
I am grateful . . .
you have made me extremely happy
thank you Richy
from my heart to yours
Sue
xxoo


[This message has been edited by littlewing (09-24-2003 05:00 AM).]

Richy
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11 posted 2003-09-24 06:06 AM




Thank you everyone for your kind replies!
And Sue, I’m glad you liked it!
As you can see, very many people here care for you.
So, the next time you feel down, I hope that
knowing how many friends you have,
will help in some small way, to lift you back up
Just like you’ve lifted us, so many times before...

Take Care,
And Thanks Again Everyone,

Richy


littlewing
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12 posted 2003-09-24 09:05 AM


Richy, I do believe you are
my guardian angel . . .
*smile*
xxoo

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