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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-09-23 05:04 PM



We are separated only by
degrees of intimacy.

There is an illusion of distance
that seems to fall across our
shared expressions.

Yet we are closer than we
know.

In the absence of walls...space
rules in holy order.

This is our connection.

We both touch the hallowed
space that lies between
us.

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-09-23 05:11 PM


Beautiful write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-09-23 05:12 PM


terrifically written,,,

                                        

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3 posted 2003-09-23 05:22 PM


Ericc
Enjoyed the read.

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-09-23 05:48 PM


...*SIGH*...

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5 posted 2003-09-23 09:13 PM


Wonderfully written!
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6 posted 2003-09-23 09:37 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, love knows no boundaries and no equators or prime meridians, for it is always there and even miles apart can be reached! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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7 posted 2003-09-23 10:36 PM


Beautiful, man....just wonderfully stated, and so true to life.

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8 posted 2003-09-24 12:22 PM


A very beautiful poem, Eric.
Thanks for sharing it with us.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Margherita
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9 posted 2003-09-24 06:26 AM


In the absence of walls...space
rules in holy order.

This is our connection.


Beautiful thought! A connection like this unfolds in total freedom and roams in untold heights!

I love you, Margherita

Margherita
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10 posted 2003-09-24 06:28 AM


... my internet connection is playing tricks meanwhile ...

another opportunity to say how much I love your poem!

M.   

[This message has been edited by Margherita (09-24-2003 06:30 AM).]

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11 posted 2003-09-24 06:36 AM



So beautifully said, Eric...enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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12 posted 2003-09-24 06:37 AM



Did someone hear a sizzle?

littlewing
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13 posted 2003-09-24 08:42 AM


God, you read my mind
(ceopt you write my thoughts better)
*smile*

In the absence of walls...space
rules in holy order.

This is our connection.

We both touch the hallowed
space that lies between
us.

space . .  beautiful Eric
xoo

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