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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-09-23 04:59 PM

Liam, is dealing with this right now. So he has a lot on his mind. This poem is dedecated (sp?) to him.
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I know you are sick
I know you are unwell
I just hope I get to see you
One last time before
You head toward heavens gate

You were my best friend
You were my first crush
You were my childhood sweetheart
Until we were pulled apart

Now I have moved on
Found someone new to love
Then I get the news
That you are sick with Hepititus
This makes the memories
Of our past flow back

Now I am confused
Now I don't know what I want
I want to be close to you
But also with the one I now love

I know to you I was just a friend
But to me you were more than that
Now that I know you might die
It makes me think of the good
Memories we had when we were young

I will still be your friend
But I am gonna stay with the one
I love now in the present
Goodbye love
But never goodbye to our friendship

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

1 posted 2003-09-23 05:11 PM

How did you do it Julie? You looked right into my heart again.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-23 05:15 PM

truely written from the heart,,,

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-09-23 05:17 PM

friendships shouldn't end. beautiful write Julie

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-09-23 11:11 PM

Some poems happy, some poems sad....and this one, happysad....

But good to read -- well done!

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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-09-23 11:54 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Julie, I send many angel hugs your way and to Liam, sweet friend, we all are praying for him and I certainly believe that prayer is the greatest healer and medicine, and know we are all holding you both in our hearts, but no matter what, know that you and Liam's love will always last and the friendship just as much! (wipes tears) We are all here for you, Liam, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-09-24 12:12 PM

Julie, I'm so sorry to hear about Liams illness. I pray that
God will heal him. Julie, this is another heartfelt write.
Thanks for sharing this with us.

Hugs

Ethel

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

7 posted 2003-09-24 12:17 PM

Actually, it's my childhood friend who has the illness, not me. I was the lucky one.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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