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BluesSerenade
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0 posted 2003-09-23 04:12 PM


~*~*~

To love like that
so freely and deeply
to shout it from the roof top
and tell the whole world
we are so blessed to feel all of this.

To walk down the path hand in your hands
skipping stones 'cross the river
carving your names in the trees
breathing in all the goodness to come
sweept across the blue sky

Wishing on a single star,
then have it come true
to give the most precious gift
holding it dear to your heart
and it's all just for you.

Keeping rhythm to the same beat
and bask in the certainty
that it doesn't get any better than this
like a soft gentle breeze
caressing your face while you sleep.

When the seasons change
and leafs turn to gold
when the snow falls and drifts
and spring blooms again
and you're not alone anymore.

When all that you know
and all that you see
is the firelight in your lover's eyes
is a reflection of you
and all that you need.

As the velvet moon rises
and leans down to kiss
holding you close in the night
one love in the making
celebrated by two.

When the morning sun shines
and you're right where you need to be
a place in heaven on earth
where dreams do come true.
and they're all about you.

~*~*~


*For wranx and littlewing*
Because love is all that, and I'm thrilled for you both.
Not to mention it was about time I wrote something happy,
and I'm happy for you.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (09-23-2003 07:20 PM).]

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-09-23 04:21 PM


Beautiful dear Lori!
I know they will love this...
and ain't love grand!?!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-09-23 04:28 PM


very nicely penned,,
i'm sure they will cherish this write,,

                                        

suthern
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3 posted 2003-09-23 04:38 PM


Yes... to shout a love... how beautiful! *S*

This is so lovely, lady... the words of joy may be for others... but they look good coming from your pen. *S*

Dark Angel
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4 posted 2003-09-23 04:44 PM


Hey Blues this is beautiful, littleone and Ed will surely love it.

Well Done

Maree.

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


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5 posted 2003-09-23 05:02 PM


Lori this is as beautiful as their love is.
Very well done bluesy one....missed ya gal...

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6 posted 2003-09-23 05:21 PM


Aye, lovin' an' hollerin'..... 'tis a consummation devoutly to be wished....

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Martie
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7 posted 2003-09-23 05:23 PM


Lori...You've expressed the warm heart that is felt when looking at love.  Beautiful!
Cpat Hair
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8 posted 2003-09-23 05:25 PM


nicely done Blues lady....

and nice to see you writing...

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-09-23 05:27 PM


BluesSerenade
A lovely write It was enjoyed by all.

vandana
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10 posted 2003-09-23 06:34 PM


enjoyed
Edder
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11 posted 2003-09-23 09:20 PM


Well done Bluesy!
BluesSerenade
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12 posted 2003-09-23 09:23 PM


Thank you everyone for reading and for all your good vibes... sometimes we need to step outside of ourselves and find our inspiration in another person's happiness.  

And I can't help but share theirs...
We should all be so lucky!!!


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13 posted 2003-09-23 09:45 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, I'm so happy to see you writing more and more and with joy, sweet friend, every one of your writes are special but this is super-special as Wranx and Tweet will always cherish this and I am so happy for their happiness too! (kiss on cheek) I too wish eternal love happiness for you, sweet Lori, God Bless You and know one love is alwaus with you, one golden love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-23-2003 09:46 PM).]

garysgirl
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14 posted 2003-09-23 10:45 PM


Lori, this is so sweet and loving. It's so
special for you to be happy for LittleOne and Ed
and to write this poem for them. I'm sure they
will love it.
Hugs to you and them  
Ethel



[This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-23-2003 10:47 PM).]

littlewing
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15 posted 2003-09-23 11:18 PM


Bluesygal:

you are the most giving person
to do something such as this . . .
I just got home and lookie here
what I found . . .

another lovely song from you . . .
always singing to me
please don't ever stop
This is beautiful and My God
again, I cannot contain my smile
*smiling HUGE here*
Thank you Lori, for this
and for you
and just because . . .
I am so honored
so so honored by you
as Ed will be too  
*smile*
always
your tweets
Sue
xxoo

All of you such beautiful people
truly

wranx
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16 posted 2003-09-24 10:34 PM


Friend Blusey!

It's wonderful to see you writing and posting.
And that you wrote THIS! Good lord, I'm honored, truly!

You're the best Lori, Thanks!

Ed...

angelblueyes
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17 posted 2003-09-24 10:51 PM


This is wonderful.
Crystal

Kaoru
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18 posted 2003-09-25 12:57 PM


It is wonderful!
BluesSerenade
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19 posted 2003-09-25 01:20 AM


Noah!!!  Thank you for all those ladybugs and your nice reply.

Ethel~ Warm hugs~

Tweets and wranx~
Love that smile of yours little littlewing~
I thank you both for inspiring me.  
Now wranx, I hear the shack flooded,
and you were rewarded with love?  
There's always a trade off eh?  
Good for you two~

Crystal and Kaoru~  Thank for the wonderful, wonderful!

Margherita
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20 posted 2003-09-25 05:16 AM


That's so exciting and touching!
Beautiful hommage to Ed and Sue.
Love sparkles all over the page.
Hugs. Margherita

vlraynes
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21 posted 2003-09-25 05:21 AM



Lori...don't know how I missed this,
but I'm glad I finally found it.

This is absolutely beautiful,
and such a lovely gift for Ed and Sue.  
You are a sweetheart.

Hugs to you, my friend...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

PouringJewels
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22 posted 2003-09-25 07:38 AM


I know more than most as Ed is my older brother. I am so thrilled he isn't alone anymore. He is the most reclusive I know and he is finally coming out. I love this man more than life. Thank you for putting it into perspective. It was a true pleasure to read.
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