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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2003-09-23 03:57 PM

Here, in early afternoon
The shadows still cling
Tight against walls and tree,
Not yet in yawning stretch
Of evening and far before
The wrap of nights blanket
On all that now
Reflects the light in diamond tipped
points of sun.

This time seems so easy
To laze about in thoughts of you
Remembering perhaps
Early morning dew on leaves
As they danced outside our window
In daybreaks breeze
And I
Was wrapped in the sigh of you
That kept me warm

Early times
Breathed in a rise and fall
That was excited by the brush of skin
Bare walled begins
And the smell of love’s original sin

Soon enough,
The moon will rise
And the wane of seasons
Remind me again

“Winter has no friend.”

For now,
I’ll ignore the shadow's limbs

Dreaming

“Would your lips meet mine so tender?
Or would your shaded eyes
Pretend?”

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (09-23-2003 04:15 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-09-23 04:00 PM

You would just beam
that light on any pretender
and the truth
will out.

I know!

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-23 04:01 PM

nicely penned,,

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2003-09-23 04:31 PM

This time seems so easy
To laze about in thoughts of you
Remembering perhaps
Early morning dew on leaves
As they danced outside our window
In daybreaks breeze
And I
Was wrapped in the sigh of you
That kept me warm

I suspect no pretense would be possible... not after this. *S* This is beautiful, Cap'n! *S*

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-09-23 05:07 PM

This time seems so easy
To laze about in thoughts of you
Remembering perhaps
Early morning dew on leaves
As they danced outside our window
In daybreaks breeze
And I
Was wrapped in the sigh of you
That kept me warm

Why oh why do I love the verse that makes me so sad!!
Outstanding, as usual, you~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-09-23 05:57 PM

I choose the same stanza as Blues as my favourite...
Achingly beautiful Ron.
This is one huge sigh waitin' to happen.
~Hugs~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-09-23 06:29 PM

enjoyed

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

7 posted 2003-09-23 06:43 PM

these words flow like liquid.

you must SWEAT poetry or something.

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-09-23 07:22 PM

Enjoyed...James

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2003-09-23 07:28 PM

"Sweat Poetry"

LOL...isn't that the truth..

Your muse is the god of muses

Pssst...Ron...it was the intake manifold gasket this time...gotta blame GM...grrrrr..cha ching

Susan

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