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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-09-23 09:40 AM




Moistured Release
~*Marge Tindal*~

You are the tear
I refuse to cry
in the shed
of harsh goodby~

It would be
my fervent plea
that need for tear
cease to be~

Clinging to lash
in gentle recall
of a time ...
that special time
when we mattered
most of all~

Turn around ...
you will find me
holding back
moistured release
of you~



Ah, just one of those rainy day writes~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
bashlovesemma
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1 posted 2003-09-23 09:46 AM


simply brilliant .. keep it up
-wish i new sum emotions and colour- my posts look borin :p

Take care-
ps EXELENT POEM

Marty Baird
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2 posted 2003-09-23 09:48 AM


I enjoyed reading your poem
& thank you for it.

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2003-09-23 09:57 AM


Beatiful write on this rainy day.  Well done Margie gal.  Hugs.
Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2003-09-23 10:00 AM


I like the way you did this one. The idea that releasing the tear is releasing the loved one-I like that.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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5 posted 2003-09-23 10:07 AM



It's OK to remember...
it's called Life...

thank you, Marge.

Betty
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6 posted 2003-09-23 10:07 AM


Marge this is so pretty. I love it.
Love ya,
Betty

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-09-23 10:17 AM


Marge  
A good rainy day write, enjoyed

Kahlil
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8 posted 2003-09-23 10:20 AM


Marge, this is just lovely, achingly...
~K~

Margherita
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9 posted 2003-09-23 12:57 PM


Softly melancholic and beautifully written.
Love, Margherita

1slick_lady
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10 posted 2003-09-23 01:02 PM


raining here on my side of fla too marge...h
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11 posted 2003-09-23 01:27 PM


very nice ma'am... very nice indeed..


Bonnie j
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12 posted 2003-09-23 01:46 PM


Marge you do write such beauty and thought provoking poems.Love your work.
Love Bon-Bon

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2003-09-23 02:48 PM



Immense appreciation to each of you for letting me know you enjoyed this rain-stained little piece~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

suthern
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14 posted 2003-09-23 04:19 PM


Turn around ...
you will find me
holding back
moistured release
of you~

Ah, lady... This shows the beauty and tenderness of your heart...

Trillium
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15 posted 2003-09-23 06:40 PM


Dear Marge: Such a touching piece and I loved every line!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

MorninGlory
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16 posted 2003-09-23 07:30 PM


Very tender poem, touching, has a gentle swell to it -

~ becky

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17 posted 2003-09-23 07:34 PM



I love those rainy days, and love this write.
Just beautiful, Marge
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

JamesMichael
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18 posted 2003-09-23 07:35 PM


Unfortunately...they don't always turn around.  James
Enchantress
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19 posted 2003-09-23 07:37 PM


So tender with such an ache of longing.
Well done Marge.
~Hugs~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

SmartChick
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20 posted 2003-09-23 08:35 PM


Very nice, Marge! A rain day can sure be depressing.
KoKo
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21 posted 2003-09-23 08:40 PM


I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Martie
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22 posted 2003-09-23 09:08 PM


We need some rain, Marge....you want to do that little rain dance for me?  
Marge Tindal
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23 posted 2003-09-23 09:16 PM


My My !
Talk about surprised at the reception this little piece has garnered ...
Thank you all~
I'll be standing in the rain again real soon~

*Tee-Hee, MartieSis~
I taught you the rain chant ... get thee to the yard !!
*Huglets* all~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

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