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My Poems, Sean, 16

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bashlovesemma
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0 posted 09-23-2003 09:16 AM       View Profile for bashlovesemma   Email bashlovesemma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bashlovesemma

Final Goodbye


I canít bear to hurt no more,
Iíve tried so hard, trying to convince myself I wasnít losing you,
My mind says fight, my heart says, do you love her enough to let her go,
The fact of the matter is, I do, so Iím going to let you go,
This has to be the hardest thing Iíve ever had to do,

All I can do is remember all the good things we did,
Its hard to concentrate with all this torture,
When youíve gone, it feels like my heart was tore in two,
I can only remember the most special night of my life,
Pretty darn good,

I couldnít have pictured that night
Being that special in our own way, spot light beaming down on us in the middle of the floor,
If I had all eternity to choose,
It was the spare of the moment thing, grabbed you by the hand,
The soft and gentle touch of your hand, wrapped my arms around you in desperation,
Danced the night away, the last song, seamed to take a life time to end,

Me singing to everything I do, into your ear, all I could do is hold on,
I didnít want the dance to end, but as my life goes, all good things come to a instant stop,
I wish you had have heard, I love you, message in that song,
From the day forward Iíve regretted not telling you,

But what I regret more, is that, I took your friendship for granted,
I sorta thought when we weíre friends weíd be friends for ever,
Itís so very hard to let go, of the woman who planted the love seed in my soul,
But as this song is called, Final Goodbye the rest of the song seams like a strong sense of love, and I canít just say good bye for the last time.

But Iím a man of his word, never the less, Iím crumbling down inside right now,
Every word I write in this song, I cry with emotion,
This song isnít just words, itís my true feelings. No lie,
Iím crying right now, and I donít think I can end this song, with goodbye,

But Iím blaming myself for everything.
© Copyright 2003 Sean Cole - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 09-23-2003 09:26 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Welcome to Passions!  Such an open pouring of affection for a lost love.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Seymour Tabin
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bashlovesemma
Welcome, strong write, enjoyed the read.
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...


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Lots of feeling in this first post.
Nicely expressed.

Welcome to Passions.
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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4 posted 09-25-2003 04:38 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(big hugggsssssss) It is perfectly natural to cry as you compose, sweet friends, I for one do it all the time when I spill out my depressing thoughts from the past and of the losses I've experienced! Don't feel ashamed to cry and end each song just the way your heart feels, sweet friend, we are all here for you to offer you hugs and comfort! This is a poignant debut, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your powerful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Kethry
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since 07-29-2000
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5 posted 09-25-2003 04:50 PM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

bashlovesemma,
you've made quite an impression on here and on me. So welcome and well come I hope you stay awhile.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


bashlovesemma
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6 posted 09-28-2003 04:09 PM       View Profile for bashlovesemma   Email bashlovesemma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bashlovesemma

Thank you all for your kind words

I will keep tryin' to please ya'll :p

Sean
JamesMichael
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7 posted 12-30-2003 11:47 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice writing...James
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