Open Poetry #29 |
I sunk your battleship |
Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I warned you once and I remain A well of love and source of pain As once was said by drunken head my love sinks ships like molten lead [This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (09-23-2003 12:53 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely penned,,,
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
WOW!!! Crystal |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your title made me laugh, but I'm not laughing now. Been there, done that! Good poem Jason~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thoughts like this stay with me for days! Your writing often does that to me. Enjoyed. Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jason: (I disagree) *smile* but know the feeling well xxoo |
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