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18th Birthday
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18th Birthday |
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Toby Junior Member
since 2003-09-21
Posts 12Ohio, United States |
I turn 18 in December, I don't know why it's so important, Nothing changes, nothings new, Why is it so important? Everyone gets excited for the big 18, Only thing different.. you can buy tobacco; Who needs that anyways, Why does it matter your age, I can buy ciggerettes whenever I want; I'm kinda scared of turning 18, Scared of getting kicked out, scared of getting in fights, scared of going out of town, and scared of leaving my family. I know my family loves me, But how do I know they won't kick me out; That's probably the thing i'm scared most for. I always told myself, I will get kicked out when I'm 18, I hope it doesn't come true, I have no money, no insurance, and no place to live. When my 18th birthday arises, I will laugh in joy, I will go to clubs, Hoping not to get kicked out. I didn't know how to end this poem. I know it's not my best, i couldn't think of words that work for this poem. My 18th Birthday is, December 27. [This message has been edited by Toby (09-22-2003 10:26 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoy life at 18 as you have been,,, nothing changes but the years,,, enjoyed the read,,, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Toby, I understand the anxiety and misconception so much, sweet friend, for any parent to push their child out the door and leave one out on their own at that age is ridiculous, and it will always be just a number! 18 to me means nothing, and whenever I hear someone say "You're 18 now!" it truly is ridiculous and it doesn't change a thing about you! (sigh) Just be yourself and keep following your heart as always and forget about the age thing, as you will always be special, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toby, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Toby Junior Member
since 2003-09-21
Posts 12Ohio, United States |
damn, you guys reply fast  |
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Toby Junior Member
since 2003-09-21
Posts 12Ohio, United States |
damn, you guys replyed fast The Poetry Corner |
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devin_lupus New Member
since 2003-09-22
Posts 9Ohio, USA |
Don't worry, Toby, you aren't going to get kicked out. If they were going to kick *you* out they would have kicked your brother out. You're safe. And anyway, you know that I'd do anything to help you out I actually think the ending for this one is pretty good :-D |
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