to err is human...(hope it doesn't suck..)

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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2003-09-22 08:41 PM

hushabye
sweet
child
please
do not
tread
into
the valley
of
fear
&
uncertainity
alone
please
take my hand...
it
is
not
a
sin
to cry
nor is
it a sin
to love
we
are
here
to
touch
taste
experience
sweet
child
to
err
is
human
you
need
not apologize
for
who you are
nor
for
your fears
hushabye
sweet
child
please
do
not
tread
into
the valley
of
fear
&
uncertainity
alone
please
take my hand..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

1 posted 2003-09-22 08:46 PM

very reassuring...to err is human, i think we all forget this sometimes, thanks for the gentle reminder. :Þ

and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-22 08:47 PM

enjoyed your write,,,

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-09-22 08:52 PM

Words that would be so comforting to a child.

A lovely poem of acceptance, unconditional love, guidance, and security. This was lovely, Kris!

Love, Light, & Children!
Linda

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

4 posted 2003-09-22 09:25 PM

You get better.

ugh yeah sure...whatever

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-09-22 09:58 PM

(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made me cry because I believe no child should ever be abandoned or neglected and I pray every child can someday have a loving mother and father and a cozy warm home and seek his or her dreams with a smile! (wipes tears) Your golden heart sines with love, sweet friend, this is sooooooo gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2003-09-23 08:01 AM

no.. doesn't suck...

I enjoyed...

oh yeah..I know... there is an off color joke I could make out of the doesn't suck or does suck..but I'll leave it alone...

lol

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-09-23 09:30 AM

beautiful Kris . . .
A celtic lullaby . . .
*smile*

hushabye . . .
ssshhhh
xxoo

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-09-23 09:31 AM

enjoyed

bashlovesemma
Junior Member

since 2003-09-23

Posts 25

9 posted 2003-09-23 09:34 AM

hey! that was a great poem... good going

take care, and keep writin'

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2003-09-23 09:59 AM

why this is absolutely stunning, precious, spiritual, what a lovely write and image!

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

11 posted 2003-09-23 09:17 PM

sweet.

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

12 posted 2003-09-23 09:20 PM

thank you

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (09-23-2003 09:20 PM).]

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

13 posted 2003-09-23 11:13 PM

I bow to greater talent

This does not suck at all, it's awesome

Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously
"Poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese. "
--G. K.Chesterto

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

14 posted 2003-09-24 12:53 PM

hushabye
sweet
child
please
do
not
tread
into
the valley
of
fear
&
uncertainity
alone
please
take my hand..

This is an awesome write, Kris. Very tender and compassionate. Very good writing, friend.

Hugs

Ethel

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

15 posted 2003-09-24 04:02 PM

thanks doll..hugsssss

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

16 posted 2003-09-24 04:05 PM

nice write...to err is human...to really screw up is Toerag..

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