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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2003-09-22 06:22 PM

     Laid upon sweet crushed roses
        Beneath moonlit skies
      Drenched red skin smeared
     Love attack attached to heart
     Feelings exposed to surfaces
      Midnight dance performed
   Two lovers’ togetherness formed

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-22 06:46 PM

the moonlight has it's ways,,,

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2003-09-22 08:29 PM

Beautiful as always, enjoy your writing!
~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (09-22-2003 08:30 PM).]

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-09-22 08:40 PM

A moonlight dance beyond compare!

EA

PoetryAngel013
New Member

since 2003-10-09

Posts 7

4 posted 2003-10-09 09:29 PM

I loved your poem. Moonlight is so romantic and perfect for those type ofthings.

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

5 posted 2003-10-09 10:11 PM

not usually my interest in poetry but ill hafta admit i enjoyed it a lot

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies. Dimmu Borgir

Shawna Fitzgerald
Junior Member

since 2003-10-09

Posts 11

6 posted 2003-10-09 10:17 PM

that was beutiful thats all i have to say
love,
shawna

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2003-10-09 10:55 PM

I love the moon light dance....beautiful..

Lauren~

There's a song inside my soul
One that I've tried to write over and over again

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2003-10-09 11:41 PM

Hello Lee

Your words portrayed some wonderful images and I really enjoyed the read.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

SongVixen
Junior Member

since 2003-07-06

Posts 43
England

9 posted 2003-10-10 01:35 AM

Uk guy this is sweet, like candy.
You look like Leonardo De caprio.

*~NATASHA~*

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

10 posted 2003-10-10 01:36 AM

This is a dance that none could compare to.

Crystal

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

11 posted 2003-10-11 10:00 AM

thanks for all the wonderful replies

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

12 posted 2003-10-12 11:57 AM

Sigh!
It's all there!
Love, Margherita

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