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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

0 posted 2003-09-22 04:59 PM

Time and movement: one.
Hurried, heaving, rushing sea
laps eternal sand.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

[This message has been edited by Pilgrimage (09-22-2003 05:07 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-09-22 05:06 PM

(sigh) Oh Nan, I just love how your poetry is always animated with color and motion, sweet friend, you gleam starlight across these pages, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2003-09-22 05:08 PM

Thank you, Noah. What a sweet reply.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-09-22 05:39 PM

very nice,, enjoyed,,,

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-09-22 06:51 PM

Nan~
PERFECT format ... PERFECT poetic thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-09-22 08:55 PM

You are a thinker, Pilgrim! --and you do it so poetically!

EA

mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

6 posted 2003-09-22 08:59 PM

it's all a part of the night. i love the twilight life. everything is better under the pulsing stars :Þ

and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-09-23 09:08 AM

Ever watch the sand rush
as it plays with the sea foam
erasing traces

~*~

Thank you Nan, for the inspiration...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2003-09-23 09:30 AM

nice.... very nice...

the form and simple word choices blend well to form the immense....

good stuff Nan... very good.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

9 posted 2003-09-23 09:43 AM

Thanks, QjQ.

Marge, I'm glad you liked it.

EA-

mytuesday- I love the dusk and the dawn, and everything in between.

Sunshine- What a lovely reply. To have inspired something that wondrous with my poem- it makes me proud.

Cpat- How nice of you! Thanks.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

10 posted 2003-09-24 05:37 PM

it breathes music of life in pass
and shows your style and special class

Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

11 posted 2003-09-24 05:47 PM

Keth, It's so good to hear from you. Thanks.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

12 posted 2003-09-24 05:56 PM

Love the image and thoughts it evokes.
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

13 posted 2003-09-25 12:27 PM

Thank you, Margherita.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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