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Krawdad
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0 posted 2003-09-22 12:07 PM



Today in my garden
clear skies and rustling leaves.
A chill in the air.



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-09-22 12:13 PM




And so it begins
Quilt me now in words alone
Enveloping warmth

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-09-22 12:14 PM


and in my garden
forced death to green leaves apart
from nature's wrath, seen

M

LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-09-22 12:14 PM


time to start a fire...

Good poem

QjQ
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4 posted 2003-09-22 12:17 PM


very good write,,,

                                       

Martie
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5 posted 2003-09-22 12:22 PM


Krawdad...Then you don't live near me...today the sky is blue and it will warm up to close to 100...but the evenings are turning blessedly cool.  Your poem place sounds lovely!
angelblueyes
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6 posted 2003-09-22 12:24 PM


We had two days of coolness, but now it's right back to the humidity and warmth.Nicely written.
Crystal

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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2003-09-22 01:05 PM


Krawdad


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2003-09-22 01:10 PM



Piles of ragged leaves,
flung together, huddle up
against Autumn's chill.



Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-09-22 01:18 PM


A little piece of perfection! I love the "chill in the air"--and the earthy smell of it!

Happy Autumn!
EA

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
10 posted 2003-09-22 01:20 PM



Well, here in Phoenix, I'm still waiting
for that 'chill in the air'.
Meanwhile, though...I enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
11 posted 2003-09-22 02:29 PM


summer does
not die
it sleeps
dreaming of
heated romance

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
12 posted 2003-09-22 07:16 PM


Krawdad - and it's a snowing on the mountain tops... But the chill is grand...

BC

vandana
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13 posted 2003-09-22 07:20 PM


enjoy your read
Amature2
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14 posted 2003-09-22 07:40 PM


Summer solstice gone
Changing colors of Autumn
Prep us for Winter

Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2003-09-22 09:30 PM


Krawdad~
Very nice ... most enjoyable~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

Mistletoe Angel
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16 posted 2003-09-22 10:09 PM


Tinges of honey
Flavor the jade velvet leaves
As Autumn dawns in



(sigh) This is a most beautiful and calm senryu, sweet friend, God Bless You, may this autumn bring you many blessings, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Chrissypooh
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17 posted 2003-09-22 10:12 PM


enjoy your read

Kahlil
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18 posted 2003-09-22 10:48 PM


becomes penetratingly cold
an echo of another autumn
a gust of the chill

~K~

Krawdad
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19 posted 2003-09-23 12:06 PM


I thank you all for stopping by.
I especially enjoy your verse responses!!!

And, my sympathies to those not enjoying season change, it's a shot of adrenalin to me.

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