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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2003-09-22 10:04 AM



Do you remember
when I took you to moonlit beaches
when I showed you rainbows
and unicorns?

Do you remember
when we danced in the rain
how we ran through the grass
when the stars sang their melodies?

Do you remember
when you comforted me with your words
when I cried and screamed and whimpered
and you were there?

Do you remember
when I was so sad it ached
so happy I touched heaven
so lonely I invented blue?

You have been with me
through pain and heartache
through love and happiness
through failures and success.

You have hugged away the bitterness
applauded my triumphs
laughed with me through
my disasters.

You are my haven in a dreary world
my sanctuary in the dark
my sanity in a world of chaos
my light, my shield, my dream.

Do you remember?



[This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-22-2003 11:12 AM).]

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-22 10:05 AM


fabulous write,,, congrats on 5,000

                                    

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-09-22 10:10 AM


Paula, this is an exciting milestone!

Congratulations on your Ascension!

This poem is a very thoughtful gift that you have given to your fellow Pipsters!

Love & Light,
EA

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2003-09-22 10:17 AM


'You are my haven in a dreary world
my sanctuary in the dark
my sanity in a world of chaos
my light, my shield, my dream."

Yes, yes, yes!!

Congratulations!!

Susan


Bonnie j
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4 posted 2003-09-22 10:20 AM



Bon-Bon

Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-09-22 10:22 AM



You made me laugh
at the "finally", Paula...
it's not like you're never here,
y'know...

you are Very Much Ensconced
in the Passions Family Album!!!

Congratulations!

littlewing
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6 posted 2003-09-22 10:23 AM


Beautiful Paula . . .
CONGRATULATIONS!
xxoo

You are my haven in a dreary world
my sanctuary in the dark
my sanity in a world of chaos
my light, my shield, my dream.

yes mine too
xxoo

Nightshade
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7 posted 2003-09-22 10:54 AM


Lovely write and congratulations! hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

Martie
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8 posted 2003-09-22 11:15 AM


Paul...Yes, I remember...Congratulations!  
Enchantress
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9 posted 2003-09-22 11:34 AM


Beautiful write Paula..
and, CONGRATULATIONS!!

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

kaile
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10 posted 2003-09-22 12:45 PM


wonderful tribute and LOL at your "finally"...i know how it feels to play catch-up...

congrats and here's to many more from you...

angelblueyes
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11 posted 2003-09-22 12:49 PM


This is a wonderful milestone and I'm glad you've reached it and will continue on.
Crystal

vlraynes
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12 posted 2003-09-22 12:54 PM



I remember...

And this?...

"You are my haven in a dreary world
my sanctuary in the dark
my sanity in a world of chaos
my light, my shield, my dream."

I believe that speaks for many of us.
Beautifully penned, Paula.

Congrats on 5000.

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

serenity blaze
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13 posted 2003-09-22 01:05 PM


smiling now--I remember ALOT of things, in spite of all my efforts to the contrary!

Congrats on 5,000 Paula! As the Grateful Dead sang so well: "What a long, strange trip it's been."

Yer good company m'friend. Ready to do 5,000 more? (POEMS that is! )

Mistletoe Angel
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14 posted 2003-09-22 01:44 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Paula, CONGRATULATIONS ON 5000, sweet friend, now you are our newest Member Ascendant, yay! (smiles) I know just how you feel and I too questioned this myself each time I thought of Joanna (who broke up with me on New Years Day) and it is such a bittersweet thought that I hope is shined over with promises of true love forever for your deserving heart! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous milestone, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paula, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2003-09-23 07:11 PM


But of course...congratulations on 5000...James
Gentle Spirit
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16 posted 2003-09-23 07:39 PM


You are my haven in a dreary world
my sanctuary in the dark
my sanity in a world of chaos
my light, my shield, my dream.

This is a place of sanctuary for many of us at Passions.  Thank you for a beautiful gifting.  Congratulations on this wonderful milestone!

Ratleader
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17 posted 2003-09-23 11:33 PM


I wasn't here for any of that....but I will be now.

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Suetang
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18 posted 2003-09-24 01:09 AM


Hello Paula

Congratulations on your 5000th post....a truly marvellous achievement.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

wayoutwalt
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19 posted 2003-09-24 08:35 AM


congrats PAula on the 5000. this is a nice continuation of your saga.
Paula Finn
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Posts 5546
missouri
20 posted 2003-10-22 10:26 AM


Thanks to all of you who read and remember...cant be here as often as I used to and now my head is so crammed with school stuff that poetry has a hard time finding a spot to rest in...sigh...little trickles down so please be patient with me
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