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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-09-22 08:12 AM



A Different Pace

These days walk to the tick of the clock
Tick, tock, tick, tock
Not a fast pace or a slow one
Just a pace that gets me through the day
I used to be in a rush because I was lonely
Then I would hurry to get back to loneliness
All the while think, this is crazy
I knew what it would be like when I got there
So these days I walk to the tick of the clock
Tick, tock, tick, tock
Alone but not lonely
I don't run I simply walk



"Due to budget cuts, the light at the end of the tunnel, has been turned off" author unknown

[This message has been edited by Amature2 (09-22-2003 08:27 AM).]

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-22 08:20 AM


very good thoughts,,,,

                                    

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-09-22 08:22 AM


Amature2
Enjoyed the ead.

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2003-09-22 09:29 AM


Oh do you have any idea how much I understand this??  Lonely but running from anything else offered...oh my...

Well done!

Susan

vlraynes
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4 posted 2003-09-22 09:33 AM



Enjoyed this, Amature.  Nicely done.
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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5 posted 2003-09-22 11:13 PM




(hugs) This is a wonderful expressive piece, sweet friend, sometimes we need to constantly change our pace so that way we can see in so many different ways along the path of life! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

angelblueyes
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6 posted 2003-09-22 11:45 PM


I hear you loud and clear.I run a 100 miles an hour a day until I exhaustt myself into bed.
Crystal

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