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youngmoeses
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since 2003-08-29
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0 posted 2003-09-22 05:38 AM



relax,hustle, find peace, and then struggle, to reach completion
shady ways where the road was paved, with hells secretions/
one bedroom ghettos spots, to a penthouse in the venetian
on a treadmill with a corvette engine, and a door i'm never reachin/
my speach patterns, release tattered emotions, from an open cut
spoke too soon cus a tomb's created from a mothers gut/
where i loom, the sun shines in a refraction of smog
even comedians' gangsters, steady laughin too hard/
critics, hop on ridick bowes, then weep and woe when they fall
children neglected by talents, don't even know when they call/
stalled movements, ever eludin touch, they'll never be reached
a new wind has brought a breath of air that has yet to been breathed/
i wonder if ideas have thoughts of they own, or if planets have homes
if god has a brother... if so why ain't he king of the throne?/
do clones know they ain't original,  do trees have subliminal names
does blood feel like it's on a  rollar coaster ride when creepin in veins/
does metal feel remorse for keepin prisoners chained?...
do the faces on my cards know that they livin a game?.../
do dead people speak... in a frequency uncharted
when they think of us are we refered to as dearly departed/
do answers ever ask questions, then get frustrated with silence
does eternity feel boredom when it remembers it's timeless?/
do apostles read the gospel, realize mistakes and then fret
when jesus turned one fish into a thousand did he mourn for their deaths?/
when my father walks in heaven, does he realize that he's dead?
are these crazy questions, or answers to the lies in my head/

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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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1 posted 2003-09-22 05:44 AM


enjoyed your write,,, very interesting thoughts expressed,,

                                    

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
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Washington
2 posted 2003-09-26 12:45 PM


Interesting write!
Questions are never "crazy." Lies will be exposed. Truth will replace the lies and truth always triumphs!

Blessings!
Shirl

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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Oklahoma
3 posted 2003-09-26 01:28 AM


Intriguing write.Questions are always asked, but not always easily answered.
Crystal

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