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youngmoeses
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since 2003-08-29
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0 posted 2003-09-22 05:30 AM


just something i wrote in about 5 minutes

Jump out of my head,
i wouldn't have ears any more to hear the noise
i wouldn't have eyes to see the suprise of boys
when they find out that other kids have dads/
I'd have no nose, to smell washington dc's stink
of politicians...
no hands to feel the concrete scream broken dreams through haunting visions/
no feet to run, from trying times,
no brain to tell me, this is what it's s'posed to say, and this is how it's s'posed to rhyme/
no ego to ask questions, i'd live in bliss
with ignorance
simple sense, and innocent, earth abiding diligance/

[This message has been edited by youngmoeses (09-22-2003 05:31 AM).]

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vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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1 posted 2003-09-22 05:33 AM



An interesting write here.
I enjoyed the flow of this.

~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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2 posted 2003-09-22 05:35 AM


interesting,,,,

                                    

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