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vlraynes
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0 posted 2003-09-22 04:55 AM




September's Daughter
                 
--Sedona, Arizona in the Fall - Webshots--

As Summer breathes a sigh of 'time to go'
September's canvas, painted near complete
Awaits the final stroke of brush in flow
In finish of a masterpiece replete

A dance of golden brown and orange hues
In puddle splash of Autumn's palette fair
Adorns a backdropped sky in deepest blues
Creating Nature's art beyond compare

A splendor such as this may rare exist
Yet there is one who's beauty doth outshine
Her words in flow are surely spirit kissed
Pure poetry and art in intertwine

September's daughter birthed in Summer's leave
Perfection of chef-d'oeuvre in Autumn's weave


~Vicky L. Raynes


Happy Birthday, Martie.  Love you much.


When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-22-2003 08:59 AM).]

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-22 05:00 AM


very nice wishes,,,,

                                    

Gunslinger
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2 posted 2003-09-22 05:02 AM


Absolutely beautiful, Vicky. What a wonderful tribute. I love your unstrained rhyme scheme, and excellent verbage. Hats off to you, milady.
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3 posted 2003-09-22 06:10 AM



What a beautiful Birthday gift, Vicky!  Martie will love it!

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4 posted 2003-09-22 06:55 AM


Vicky~
It's simply beautemous~

May I add a shortie ?

MartieSis~
A very Happy Birthday wish
is sent your way this morn
Meant to lift your spirit
and your day adorn~

You are the bestest Sis
ever sent my way
So with love ... lots of love
I wish for you a HAPPY day~

*Morning Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com   

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5 posted 2003-09-22 07:21 AM


Ahhhh this is a beautiful birthday gift Vicky

HAPPY BIRTHDAY Martie Hope you're home before lunch time.

and a

Maree.

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


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6 posted 2003-09-22 09:06 AM


Oooh what a wonderful gift Vicky!
Martie will absolutely love it!
Beautifully penned dear lady.

*Happy Birthday Martie!*

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

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7 posted 2003-09-22 09:22 AM


vlraynes
Martie will love it, excellent.

Susan Caldwell
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8 posted 2003-09-22 09:25 AM


Vicky,

This was beautiful and so sweet!

Happy Birthday Martie!

Susan


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9 posted 2003-09-22 09:37 AM


This lovely poem will undoubtedly add to Martie's sparkle! Absolutely beautiful!

~ and Martie, have a happy, happy birthday! May this coming year be filled with joy, vibrant good health and prosperity!

Big, birthday hugs,
Linda

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10 posted 2003-09-22 09:39 AM


Beautiful Vicky, as they always are
what a beautiful soul you are
and Martie?
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

This is a nice morning smile

thank you
xxoo

Martie
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11 posted 2003-09-22 09:45 AM


Vicky...Look at the treasure I found gift wrapped in my favorite thing....words!  Thank you, dear friend, for this poem.  It shows how very special you are!  Thanks too to all who replied with birthday wishes, and Marge...for the poem within the poem.  Hugs to everyone!  
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12 posted 2003-09-22 02:31 PM


Sedona....perfect backdrop for a poem of a lady who is as much -- and maybe more -- spirit than reality.

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13 posted 2003-09-22 02:34 PM


My my, A wonderful gift Vic.

Beauty for a beauty...How fitting, this.


Happy Birthday Martie!!!

Ed

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14 posted 2003-09-22 02:35 PM


this is just a beautiful gift vicky...happy day martie!!!...h
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15 posted 2003-09-22 02:46 PM


As Summer breathes a sigh of 'time to go'
September's canvas, painted near complete
Awaits the final stroke of brush in flow
In finish of a masterpiece replete

A dance of golden brown and orange hues
In puddle splash of Autumn's palette fair
Adorns a backdropped sky in deepest blues
Creating Nature's art beyond compare
=======================


Such a beautiful sharing of your rhymes and heart....
this is so lovely Vicky-girl...
Hallmark has got nothing on you.

"If you feel heartbreak, distant thunder, lightning, earthquakes ...
If you wonder why the earth moves ... this is me missing you."

JH

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16 posted 2003-09-22 04:38 PM




(does happy birthday dance) Yay! Oh Vicky, Martie is truly everyone's friend and she is a daughter of every season, sweet friend, this is a most gorgeous tribute to her as Martie will always be our flower girl with so many colorful visions and love to share! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, Happy Birthday Martie and God Bless You Both, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Jason Lyle
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17 posted 2003-09-22 04:44 PM


Beautiful write Vicky, Happy birthday Martie!

Jason

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18 posted 2003-09-22 05:36 PM


Vicky, this is beautiful...


Happy Birthday Martie!!!!

Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously
"Poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese. "
--G. K.Chesterto

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19 posted 2003-10-13 08:02 PM


very beautifully penned for a friend on her birthday...

hugs, g

"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..."  B. Adams

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20 posted 2003-10-14 08:11 AM


Happy Day Martie.....

Beautiful poem Vicky.....


HUGSSSSx2

Lauren


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