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ctowen
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0 posted 2003-09-22 12:01 PM


In life's climbing walls
layered of blood and stone
your name softly calls
echo's of my moan
whispered in these halls
emptied, now alone
above where rain falls
in clouds of grey tone
where endless time crawls
forever, my throne

- the tower



One's outlook can be another's expression.
  

[This message has been edited by ctowen (09-22-2003 12:02 AM).]

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vlraynes
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1 posted 2003-09-22 12:04 PM



I like this very much.  
Enjoyed the rhyme scheme too.
Nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-09-22 12:36 PM


enjoyed,,,

                                    

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2003-09-22 12:40 PM


well done, sir
gemjop
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4 posted 2003-09-26 12:08 PM


  
Ratleader
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5 posted 2003-10-02 09:25 AM


Even when alone, we're not alone. We're right there with ourselves the whole time.

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inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2003-10-03 06:37 AM


much better
and thanks again,truly

LeeJ
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7 posted 2003-10-03 07:55 AM


your are indeed a towering poet, wonderfully expressed!
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