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Suetang
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0 posted 2003-09-21 11:04 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * *

I wrote this prior to recently becoming a volunteer
where I visit an elderly person in their home
and spend a few hours with them each week.
A couple of months after this was written
I was matched up with an 83 year old lady named Merle who I have been visiting every Friday
for the past month. I find my volunteer work so very rewarding and I hope to do more in the future.This was written purely from my imagination.

* * *

I tried to step inside her shoes
And walk around for awhile
Her eyes seemed sad and distant
And her face contained no smile

She looked so lost and lonely
In desperate need of a friend
Had her heart been broken
And would it ever mend?

I sat quietly down beside her
And I greeted her with a smile
I thought I'd keep her company
And stay for just awhile

We talked about so many things
About her life in days gone by
As she searched inside her memory
I saw a tear escape her eye

Her face began to change
As she opened up to me
Her tales were so uplifting
She seemed so alive and free

We talked for what seemed hours
For much longer than awhile
But it was worth every single minute
To see the joy within her smile

* * *

"Love is the greatest of all cures -
not least for loneliness
Finding a cause or purpose beyond
ourselves gives us a vital sense
that life is worth living -
Whatever our personal circumstances,
and whether or not we have
someone to come home to"


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-09-21 11:50 PM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I too love volunteer work and I spend many hours each month at the Christian Community Center visiting the elderly and keeping them company and helping set up the afternoon activities for them and I also help out at the Denver Rescue Mission and serve soup and food to the people there! (sigh) You have a most giving and loving heart that makes so many feel comfortable and good about hemselves, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

DawnG
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2 posted 2003-09-22 12:05 PM


Suetang,

I have to agree with Noah here. You do have a beautiful heart. If you had not told us this was a made up poem I would have thought it a lovely dedication to the elderly lady with whom you volunteer. Have you shown her this lovely poem? I'm betting she would enjoy reading it.

                           Dawn

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3 posted 2003-09-22 12:22 PM



I have always impressed upon my daughters to make a difference and that they should leave this world a better place than the one they were born into ~ and you, Dear Sue, are doing just that!--making a difference! The world will is a better place because you're in it!


Linda

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4 posted 2003-09-22 12:22 PM


Sue:  Lovely poem!  So good of you to visit Merle every week.  It is very rewarding I know.  My son and I have been visiting a shut-in neighbor for the past four years, every Thursday morning. I think we get more from the visits than she does!

Love
Betty Lou

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5 posted 2003-09-22 12:39 PM


fabulous penning Lady ,,,

                                    

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6 posted 2003-09-22 06:59 AM


SueTang~
This is such a lovely reminder of the difference we can make in a life~

My own life has been made richer by the care taken to share just a little time with others~

Bless you sweet lady~
*Huglets
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com   

Suetang
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7 posted 2003-09-22 05:44 PM


Thank you all for your wonderful comments.  I have always felt so comfortable in the company of people much older than myself and feel they have so much to give.  I just wish I had been able to do this long ago.

Dawn - Yes, I did show the poem to Merle and she really liked it.  I found out on my first visit that she liked reading poetry, before I told her that I write.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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8 posted 2003-09-22 05:46 PM


Sue, so much gratifying work can be done with
our senior citizens across the world.  So many have few relatives that continue to put
quality time with them first....Our own lives
cause rifts in this area.....the ages of many
who would visit lend to the loneliness and
isolation....

As I once said,  behind the eyes of every elderly person
is the vision of a child that is lonely
and wants to come out and play....the eyes
never age,  just the body around them...

Thanx for sharing your happiness with us.  
Hopefully it will become contagious...

Barry

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9 posted 2003-09-22 07:20 PM


Suetang - you're very special to do something like this. To have someone like this lady smile is a very nice reward...

BC

vandana
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10 posted 2003-09-22 07:24 PM


enjoyed
GypsyGirl
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11 posted 2003-09-22 07:28 PM


Oh what a beautiful poem and picture. And yes, love is the greatest. It is indeed a very rewarding thing to do. I work with the elderly, myself.
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