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Magnus
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0 posted 2003-09-21 10:00 PM


This invisible trail of seduction, wafting
delicately within my senses.

I knew the name, yet the wearer of such
finery was yet to be seen.  I prayed that
this trail would remain fresh before me.

So many delicate things I have noticed
over years of becoming more aware of
sense than cents or sex.   The way of
how nails are kept immaculately fine
and cleaned, polished clear and natural.
The softness of hair that is combed
immaculately.   The blouse that hides
yet reveals ever slightly the delicacies
of a sensual woman, revealing, yet
hiding the inner desires.

Lips that are natural or lightly glossed
so that they appear glistening and
moist....or a soft red that accents yet
does not overpower the beauty of
a woman’s face.

A light blush to the cheeks,   very
sensual and passionate.   Lashes
that highlight the eyes, yet allow
the true color to gleam and
capture.   Eyes reveal so much
of the inner person and soul.

Fine wines age slowly and
only better with age. Silk is
silk, and a butterfly lands
ever softly on the hand.

So too does she....she who wears
that exquisite scent that is so alluring
as hips softly sway and eyes say
to a man that she has the stuff,
the right stuff!!!

© Copyright 2003 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-09-21 10:13 PM




(smiles) Oh Barry, this is beautiful, sweet friend, such an innocent sensuality fills these words, and truly the grace of a woman makes up all that wonderful stuff, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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2 posted 2003-09-21 10:18 PM


Fine wines age slowly and
only better with age. Silk is
silk, and a butterfly lands
ever softly on the hand.


terrific penning,, Sir Poet

                                    

Martie
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3 posted 2003-09-21 10:23 PM


Barry...

"Fine wines age slowly and
only better with age. Silk is
silk, and a butterfly lands
ever softly on the hand."

I must remember this tomorrow.   

Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2003-09-21 10:50 PM


I have very specific reasons for loving this so much..

I am saving this...

Susan

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5 posted 2003-09-21 11:56 PM



Barry...this is truly beautiful...in every way.

Hugs to you, my friend...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

littlewing
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6 posted 2003-09-22 10:16 AM


Barry . . . I couldnt agree with you more:

Fine wines age slowly and
only better with age. Silk is
silk, and a butterfly lands
ever softly on the hand.

Beautiful writing, my goodness
xxoo

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-09-22 10:27 AM


You are a man who truly appreciates the 'fairer' sex.

Smiling...
EA

SharaRose
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8 posted 2003-09-22 11:44 AM


There are *many* reasons to love being a woman, but this is the *sweetest* one. Thanks for noticing!!!
Shara~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

LeeJ
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9 posted 2003-09-22 12:06 PM


Fine wines age slowly and
only better with age. Silk is
silk, and a butterfly lands
ever softly on the hand.

Simply lovely as is the entire poem....thank you for sharing

angelblueyes
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10 posted 2003-09-22 12:06 PM


This is wonderful and I'm keeping it. That way everytime I need my heart touched, I'll just come back to your write.
Crystal

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11 posted 2003-09-23 04:53 PM


Oh the allure is like magic and mystery all rolled into one.

This is a beauty, Barry~

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12 posted 2003-09-23 05:38 PM


Magnus
Hey barry you taking poetry pills?
This is a keeper.

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13 posted 2003-09-23 06:30 PM


nice read
Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2003-09-23 09:31 PM


Magnus~
You simply turn the senses of a woman~
This is breathtakingly lovely~

I combine a touch of silk with White Shoulders~


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (09-23-2003 09:34 PM).]

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15 posted 2003-09-23 11:35 PM


Ooh, if she's half of this, she does indeed!

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16 posted 2003-09-24 12:30 PM


Fine wines age slowly and
only better with age. Silk is
silk, and a butterfly lands
ever softly on the hand.

So too does she....she who wears
that exquisite scent that is so alluring
as hips softly sway and eyes say
to a man that she has the stuff,
the right stuff!!!


Oh yes, Barry, the eyes
will always tell...
Hugs  
Ethel
>

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-25-2003 11:00 AM).]

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17 posted 2003-09-25 10:50 AM


Fine wines age slowly and
only better with age. Silk is
silk, and a butterfly lands
ever softly on the hand.

So too does she....she who wears
that exquisite scent that is so alluring
as hips softly sway and eyes say
to a man that she has the stuff,
the right stuff!!!

And those of us who lack sigh in envy of her... and appreciation of this tribute! *S*

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