navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #29 » To Dream You Into View
Open Poetry #29
Post A Reply Post New Topic To Dream You Into View Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-09-21 06:52 PM




The trees stand tall like sentinels
As they salute the morning sun
There's so many signs from nature
That new life has just begun

You can almost hear a pin drop
Upon the forest floor
Here I am at one with nature
With so much yet to explore

The sun shines out across the valley
On this early Summer's morn
I breathe in the cool clean air
And I feel like I'm reborn

The birds call to each other
Through the treetops way up high
As they go about their business
Before they take to the sky

I close my eyes and imagine
That I'm lying here with you
As I try with all my might
To dream you into view

* * *

"If I never met him,
I would have dreamed him into being"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
1 posted 2003-09-21 06:54 PM


Hi Sue,  forgive me for not commenting on
some of your poetry lately.  You write
beautiful words,  complimented by the
tranquility of the picture and the thoughts
you have put within our mind, visible in
our mind's eye.  

Thank You.

QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
2 posted 2003-09-21 06:56 PM


excellent penning,,,

                                    

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
3 posted 2003-09-21 07:28 PM






(smiles) Yay! Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I understand the yearning and every time I see a rose, hear a bird sing, or see a young fawn sip softly from a spring stream, it makes me think of the girl I see in my dreams and wanting so much to love her! (big hugggssssssss) This is precious, sweet friend, may true love always sing in your heart like the baby bird in the trees, here are some gorgeous pictures of aspens in Colorado where I live, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!





May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2003-09-21 10:36 PM


Barry

Thank you for your most humbling words.

Glenn

Thanks for stopping by to read this.

Noah

The pictures you sent are absolutely breathtaking and I can imagine how
beautiful your homeland must be as I
have seen it in documentaries and I
think it is absolutely beautiful.  Thank
you for sharing them with me.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Zinsser
Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
5 posted 2003-09-22 09:24 AM


beautiful......
vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
6 posted 2003-09-22 09:30 AM



This is truly beautiful, Sue.
Just yesterday, I was telling a friend that
I felt like I needed to just get 'away' and
go out in the woods somewhere...just me and
everything Nature.  It's been far too long...

Enjoyed this, Sue...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2003-09-22 09:30 AM


Suetang
You write so well and I enjoyed it so much.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
8 posted 2003-09-22 09:56 AM


"I close my eyes and imagine
That I'm lying here with you
As I try with all my might
To dream you into view"

* * *

"If I never met him,
I would have dreamed him into being"

Very beautiful.

Susan

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
9 posted 2003-09-22 09:59 AM


"I close my eyes and imagine
That I'm lying here with you
As I try with all my might
To dream you into view"

Sue...you pen such beautiful lines with your lovely words.
So very much enjoyed the read today.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
10 posted 2003-09-22 10:02 AM


Sue:

Oh how I adore nature, My God to be in the woods . . . is just . . .
utter peace . . .

and here:

"If I never met him,
I would have dreamed him into being"

me too Sue . . me too
Love You Much and miss you
xxoo  

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
11 posted 2003-09-23 04:20 PM


Hi Sue, this was such a beautiful poem,
and I love the idea of dreaming him into view.

Very nice~

vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
12 posted 2003-09-23 06:37 PM


enjoyed this much
MorninGlory
Member
since 2003-08-30
Posts 175
Oklahoma
13 posted 2003-09-23 07:33 PM


Beautiful - this time of year is so gorgeous.. but it just doesn't last long enough here in Oklahoma. Always nice to have someone by your side to welcome the changing of the seasons, celebrating the cycle of life. Wonderful poem.

~ becky

Ratleader
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
14 posted 2003-09-24 01:51 AM


....mmmmmmm.....sounds like you and Jim Fraser have a bit in common today....
/pip/Forum82/HTML/000180.html

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
15 posted 2003-09-24 02:21 AM


I close my eyes and imagine
That I'm lying here with you
As I try with all my might
To dream you into view

* * *

"If I never met him,
I would have dreamed him into being"



Sue, this is so beautiful...and if I had never met my Gary, I would have dreamed him into view!!
Hugs  
Ethel

Kandi
Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354
North of Hell
16 posted 2003-09-24 03:07 AM


I love the image that came to mind while reading this. So peaceful, so real.
Thank you for an excellent read.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
17 posted 2003-09-24 10:02 AM


Hi Sue ... a magnificent bit of writing. I could smell the fresh, cool clean air and see the mountains and tall trees as I read this. Great imagery.

Hope all is well with you and your enjoying your new volunteer job. Summer is wrapping up here and my garden, sadly, is beginning to die down and get ready for the freeze and snow. I hope you enjoyed the pictures I sent.

Hugs to you and your family, Marti

Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you.

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

18 posted 2003-09-24 10:09 AM


oh how beautiful

I close my eyes and imagine
That I'm lying here with you
As I try with all my might
To dream you into view

wishing you all the love you deserve....may life endow you with all your dreams come true.

Trillium
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
Idaho, USA
19 posted 2003-09-24 01:26 PM


Sue:  What a wonderful write!  I loved every line of it.

Betty Lou Hebert

suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
20 posted 2003-09-24 03:37 PM


I close my eyes and imagine
That I'm lying here with you
As I try with all my might
To dream you into view

Ah, yes... I know this well. *S* That's when I don't open my eyes, but just enjoy the dream... for even nature's beauty can't compete. *S*

I like this very much! *S*

Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
21 posted 2003-09-24 06:00 PM


Thank you all for your beautiful comments and I'm so glad my words took you to a nice place.  

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #29 » To Dream You Into View

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary