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Marty Baird
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0 posted 2003-09-21 06:08 PM



Players in the game life searching for justification.

Silver mussel and white paws. On what had once been a
pure black coat adorned the one.

The other celebrating life's first summer had hair shining with youths glow.

There is beauty in the flow of their bodies as they move.

One fleeing for its life.

Maybe that's what their both doing?

Time seems to stop and hold its breath while the saga plays out.

A Saga played by all of us.

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1 posted 2003-09-21 06:20 PM


interesting write,,,

                                    

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2 posted 2003-09-21 06:31 PM


...a young child and an old dog...?  A pleasant picture of innocence and wisdom.  Welcome.

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3 posted 2003-09-21 06:31 PM


Marty~
WELCOME to Passions~

This is a great write ... I saw the action~

Thanks for joining us ... you'll find many fine poets here to read and inspire you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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4 posted 2003-09-21 07:17 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful vision of innocence and the grandness of life, sweet friend, time is always a friend when the sun is shining! This is a radiant and gorgeous debut, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Marty, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your scintillating poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marty, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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5 posted 2003-09-21 07:38 PM




Welcome to Passions
Enjoyed your first post
Have fun here!
Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

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6 posted 2003-09-21 07:52 PM


I enjoyed this. very much

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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7 posted 2003-09-21 08:05 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

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8 posted 2003-09-21 08:19 PM



I think I see racoons!  I guess that's better than seeing dead people!  LOL...Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

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