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mkcbf
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since 2003-08-12
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0 posted 2003-09-21 04:13 PM



Tree, apple tree, in sight (atop the hill)                      

Wind, blowing (upon my face)

Spring fragrance (of daisies)                    

Laughter, distant (a child’s)

Your lips kissing me (I taste)

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-09-21 04:28 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, but it certainly is a gorgeous drea that can come true for you so eaisly, sweet friend, as you have a deserving heart that embraces the spring with grace! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, may all your dreams come true, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
2 posted 2003-09-21 04:41 PM


Hey m - sounds like one beautiful
dream to me . . .
*smile*
xxoo

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow
3 posted 2003-09-22 10:41 PM


Wow. I'm not sure why but I loved this
devin_lupus
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since 2003-09-22
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Ohio, USA
4 posted 2003-09-22 10:47 PM


This was so simply but ultimately beautiful in it's simplicity. Now I wish that *I* could learn to do that! Beautifully done

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