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Madness Pursues the Personification
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Madness Pursues the Personification |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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If I pretend you are here if I spin happy tales in my head does that make me insane? If I turn and you are there sleeping in my bed have I lost my mind? will I be locked away? If I whisper to you as I softly weep in the darkness of my room will you answer? will you kiss the tears away? If I have a happy ending all worked out in my heart would you turn away from your part? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sanity is overrated.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
lol..you mad me laugh..thank you. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
my pleasure grins |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Susan...When you pretend, can't you make your own ending? I do understand this...I grew up with much make believe. I think it is how I got through some of those years.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I believe we all need a bit of make-believe in our lives, sweet friend, that is where faith and hope, and even fear, comes from and if you don't have faith or hope, then life is quite unimaginative and heartless! (sigh) I too agree that sanity is overrated and insanity does have a bit of a charm to it, God Bless You, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"If I have a happy ending all worked out in my heart would you turn away from your part?" Hi Susan. Enjoyed this write very much and expecially related to the sentiment of these last lines. It all seems so simple, feels so right...there inside our hearts. The happy endings, so perfectly realized if the other person plays their part.  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
how long will we do this to ourselves for? its driving me mental, and you captured it here. hugs. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
If I pretend you are here if I spin happy tales in my head does that make me insane? Susan, I guess everyone has to work out their own thoughts in their head...you know, an individual thing. But, if I didn't have my hopes and dreams, I would be insane for sure...not the other way around. So, who can say what is sane or insane in another individuals life? And this part..... If I have a happy ending all worked out in my heart would you turn away from your part? is the whole key to happiness in a relationship....the other person has to do their part to make it work, too. Hugs to you, sweet lady, Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good Lord Susan . . . you ARE thinking my thoughts Oh , I adore this I do xxoo |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed the write,,, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you all  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I am a sucker for happy endings although they still make me cry. Your writing is pure emotion, both happy and sad, and it speaks to me in every way. Keep on keeping on Susan, it's all good!!! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"If I pretend you are here if I spin happy tales in my head does that make me insane?" Gawd...I hope not... If it did, then I'd be in the padded room right next to yours...LOL. Sometimes...pretending is the only way to stay sane. Enjoyed this, susan... When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-21-2003 10:39 PM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Bluesy~Thank you. I like happy endings also..just trying to find one. Vicky~Thank you and you are right...I guess we all do it...and it does keep me sane, because maybe, just maybe... Susan  to you both[This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (09-22-2003 12:30 AM).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
...and what again is sane?...h |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sometimes losing your mind is the only way of saving it... Loving, healing hugs, Linda |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Helen~I don't have a clue.. EA~Well I have lost my many times...lol |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
What is in your mind and heart doesn't make you insane.It makes you a psaaionate person that wants these feelings and deserves to have them in return.My friend you will have all that you desire and more for the sketch of your soul shows such inner beauty that one can't resist. Crystal |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Crystal~ You response made me do a little thinking...there is so much I could say, but I will leave it with a simple thank you. [This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (09-22-2003 12:44 PM).] |
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