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mkcbf
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0 posted 2003-09-21 03:04 PM


Gigantic laughter,
As of:
A child at the mercy of:
A father’s hand.
Enormous hands,
That wield:
Endless giggles. That wield:
Away my fears.

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Kind of rough :\

-mkcbf


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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-09-21 03:18 PM


I am jealous.

Susan

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2 posted 2003-09-21 03:51 PM




(sigh) I suppose this feeling can go two ways, dearest friend, we all want to be feeled and treated for in different ways and what may seem like comfort to one child may be a bit rough to another! (big hugggssssss) I personally prefer to be felt for in a gentle way, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-09-21 04:45 PM


m - not rough, more like raw
very nice and yes *smiling*
when I read this . . .
(would make a nice senyru too!)
xxoo

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4 posted 2003-09-21 06:10 PM


very good thoughts expressed,,,

                                    

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5 posted 2003-09-21 06:36 PM


MK~
Having spent the morning with my granddaughter, and listening to the obvious squealing glees of delight when he tickled her fancy, made me especially understand this piece so well~

Welcome to Passions~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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vlraynes
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6 posted 2003-09-26 05:26 AM



Oh yes...smiling at this too.  Love it...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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