A tiny pocket poem........

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Ratleader

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0 posted 2003-09-21 10:02 AM

my hand
strays
into your
pocket

casual and

intense

cloth
warm as
a kiss

your
secret
curves

Bonnie j
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1 posted 2003-09-21 10:18 AM

I will put your pocket poem in the bottom of my purse right next to my perfume and each time I open I will hear your sweet words of peotry.
Bon-Bon

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2 posted 2003-09-21 10:21 AM

Yum! I have a feeling it'll be happy there...it likes to be flecked with bits of makeup, and peep out at pretty faces....

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-09-21 10:27 AM

OMG! I know just what you mean! You are sooooo goooood at eliciting big emotions in me with your little writes!

...I'm still tingling all over! This was deliciously tantalizing!

Here's to more of those warm, and intimately special moments!

EA

Martie

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4 posted 2003-09-21 10:27 AM

Ed...what a gently evocative image!

Ratleader

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5 posted 2003-09-21 10:30 AM

...mmmm...I'm thinking of a warm and gently evocative pocket....got one I can borrow? I'll keep it warm for you....

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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Krawdad
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6 posted 2003-09-21 10:47 AM

"poems" out to be kept in pockets,
never far from the curves

nice one

GypsyGirl
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7 posted 2003-09-21 10:52 AM

Nice poem.

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-09-21 11:15 AM

Ed you sneaky thing you
*smiling*
xxoo

NewEnglandlazurlu
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9 posted 2003-09-21 04:04 PM

Ed ... this is just delightful!

Hugs, Marti

Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you.

Jason Lyle
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10 posted 2003-09-21 04:14 PM

Short, sweet, and sexy.I liked.

Jason

1slick_lady
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11 posted 2003-09-21 04:19 PM

hot stuff buddy

Mistletoe Angel

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12 posted 2003-09-21 04:24 PM

(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made me smile reading as all your pocket-sized treasures can so easily be pulled out and make ones heart smile in an instant! (big hugggsssssss) This is a true cham, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ed, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

garysgirl

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13 posted 2003-09-21 04:58 PM

Ed, you are a naughty delight......
But, then, it could be a coat pocket poem, not a
blouse pocket poem or a jeans pocket poem.

I'm outta here, before I say something else!! LOL

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-21-2003 04:59 PM).]

QjQ
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14 posted 2003-09-21 06:02 PM

good write,,,

Patricia
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15 posted 2003-09-21 06:34 PM

I liked this so much, Ed. You win the prize...the first person to put a smile on my face today...and it is 5:30 in the p.m. Thanks, bud!

Patricia

ThisDiamond
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16 posted 2003-09-21 08:36 PM

What a smile you bring to my eyes as I read this little miracle...wouldn't mind a pocket full...TD

vlraynes
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17 posted 2003-09-21 08:38 PM

Enjoyed the thought of this, Ed. Nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

suthern

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18 posted 2003-09-21 09:14 PM

What a sensual delight this is... the briefest moment gains significance through your pen. *S*

BluesSerenade
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19 posted 2003-09-21 09:23 PM

Very safe place to keep
and ever so sweet dear Ed~

John B
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20 posted 2003-09-21 09:32 PM

i like your curve dude.
i guess endings are rude.
neat stuff though

Enchantress
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21 posted 2003-09-21 09:38 PM

Mmmm...makes me feel all warm and....*S*

Love this!

~Hugs~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

Sunshine

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22 posted 2003-09-22 10:25 AM

Ah Ed...I like
this pocketed poem
very, very much...

Toerag
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23 posted 2003-09-22 10:31 AM

Ratleader...shame on you!!! Have you been hanging around with a Toerag?.....

LeeJ
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24 posted 2003-09-22 11:37 AM

this was a pocket full of golden coins, enriching life, soul and mind....lovely words

angelblueyes
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25 posted 2003-09-22 12:25 PM

This pocket poems a keeper of the sweetness of your heart.

Crystal

Sunshine

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26 posted 2003-10-14 10:30 AM

...because we have new folk
that didn't see this the first time...

icebox
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27 posted 2003-10-14 10:47 AM

Amazing! Bravo!!!

Sudhir Iyer
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28 posted 2003-10-14 11:31 AM

nicely written...

regards
sudhir

garysgirl

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29 posted 2003-10-14 11:54 AM

Ed, I had to read this little gem again.
It's so cute.

I still say you're naughty, but aren't we all
a little bit?

Hugs

Ethel

ParisGrl
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30 posted 2003-10-14 02:30 PM

Ed,

This is very provacative. I definitely enjoyed the read.

~Laura~

jellybeans
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31 posted 2003-10-14 02:42 PM

ah...the brevity only accents the intensity...only in my dreams has anyone touched the dreams inside my pockets...sigh...no...make that a double sigh...

allamericanjoe
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32 posted 2003-10-14 02:47 PM

Very secksee little poem. Well done!

Thanks for sharing this, I'm gonna keep for a rainy day.

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