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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-09-21 07:29 AM


Opinion

Death holds dominion
O’er the flower
Of my opinion

And breath mists the air
O’er the power
Of my care

Touch holds frugality
O’er the dower
Of reality
  
And my heart
Holds the wear
Of the dare

So be it.



© Copyright 2003 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-21 07:31 AM


enjoyed this one very much,,,

                                    

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-09-21 07:31 AM



That it be...
just so!

Good Sunday Morning, Sy!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2003-09-21 07:31 AM


life moments are wonderful are they not!
enjoyed the read

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-09-21 08:51 AM


Mornin' T-Man!

~ and in my opinion, your talented heart shows no wear from poetic dare.

Loves 'n hugs this fine morning!
EA

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-09-21 08:55 AM


QjQ
Thank you glad you enjoyed.

Sunshine
And so it is.

Roniece,
Yes they are, thank you.

Earth Angel,



Enchantress
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6 posted 2003-09-21 09:09 AM


So be it!
Wonderful morning words Sy!
Tea's on..I'll pour.
~Monring hugs and tea, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-09-21 09:17 AM


ahhh SY, I have missed you . .
yes . .  so be it . . .
*smile*
xxoo

Charisma
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8 posted 2003-09-21 09:17 AM


Beautiful Sey, as always I enjoyed reading your words!

((hugs))
Charisma

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-09-21 09:22 AM


Nancy,
You pour I'll drink.

littlewing
And I have missed you.

Charisma
And I enjoy reading your replies. :squeze:

scorpio
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10 posted 2003-09-21 10:20 AM


Good morning, Sy...once again you leave us with things to ponder..

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-09-21 10:42 AM


scorpio
Pondering is good, LOL Thank you.

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12 posted 2003-09-21 10:43 AM


Enjoyed, Sey,
and . . .

Rebirth holds sway
O're the cower
Of this day

Martie
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13 posted 2003-09-21 10:51 AM


Good morning, Sy...I always enjoy reading you daily thoughts.  
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-09-21 10:59 AM


Krawdad
Well said, thank you.

Martie,
And I always enjoy your yard of lace.

Bonnie j
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15 posted 2003-09-21 11:39 AM


Just read your reply to Martie. The words "yard of lace" has sent my mind into a poem. Have to see what I can come up.
Thanks for sharing your words of poetry.
Bon-Bon

Susan Caldwell
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16 posted 2003-09-21 11:42 AM




You are a special man...and not in a short school bus kind of way...

Susan

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17 posted 2003-09-21 12:36 PM


Good morning, Seymour,
As always, I love this piece of your heart
and your thoughts that you've shared with us.
Hugs to you, sweet friend  
Ethel

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18 posted 2003-09-21 12:40 PM


Its my opinion that you are a poet of exception...


and my opinion is the only one that matters LOL

got your note and wrote you back.


*winkiewinkie*

"If you see lonely, clear skies turning stormy ...
Lightning strikes and all you see is blue ... this is me missing you"

JH

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19 posted 2003-09-21 12:43 PM


Good Morning Sy,  the beating heart holds
the key to all, does it not?   For without
it,  the breath would not blow the candle's
flame,  and the chill of skin would not
warm the softest bed of rest.


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20 posted 2003-09-21 02:00 PM


Seymour~

'opinion' ... hmmm, I had one of those once~
It caused waves ... I wasn't into surfing
so it darn near drowned me~

Now I have another ... this is wonderful penning, poet~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com   

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21 posted 2003-09-21 03:10 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Seymour, it is great to read your wonderful poetry again, sweet friend, in my opinion I also believe you are an extraordinary poet with dare and grace deep at heart! (sigh) Of course it's just one opinion, but I believe I'd be speaking for everyone here when all opinions are accounted for how special you are, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Mistletoe Angel
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22 posted 2003-09-21 03:10 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Seymour, it is great to read your wonderful poetry again, sweet friend, in my opinion I also believe you are an extraordinary poet with dare and grace deep at heart! (sigh) Of course it's just one opinion, but I believe I'd be speaking for everyone here when all opinions are accounted for how special you are, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Seymour Tabin
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23 posted 2003-09-21 05:39 PM


Bonnie  
Thank you so much for your reply and luck with the write.

Susan
Thank you dear hugs.

Ethel,
Your just a lover. LOL hugs.

JM,
And you are a butterfly of exception.
WWRS

Barry,
You got that right.

Marge  
Now I know you can swim. Hugs back.

Noah,
Noah my friend I missed your replies.


vlraynes
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24 posted 2003-09-24 04:25 AM



Sy...here I am playing 'catch up' again...LOL.
Glad I found this before it got away.

Love it, my friend...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Seymour Tabin
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25 posted 2003-09-24 07:33 AM


vlraynes
Thank you my dear.

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