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colifer Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 37Ohio |
there's a road that we all must find it's easy to follow by day but night leaves the traveller behind so to assist us in our darkened scene we hide under lamps and stare at the night like children would a TV screen. It's safe here but not over there and there's a fine line separating the rest but the thought of leaving is hard to bear, almost sickening the potion inside my chest. the light is bright and welcome and warm and it's a pleasing and asthetic view. but standing under puts shadows on your eyes making it impossible to see into you. So we must make our move, into dark and follow the path of stone but even walking together in dark ...you might as well be alone. But sometimes, walking back to us we see a stranger or friend... ...but if we stare long enough the vision soon will end. But do not follow them, listen here. That's not where you should be actually you should find your own path you shouldn't even be talking to me. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed this very much,,, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"So we must make our move, into dark and follow the path of stone but even walking together in dark ...you might as well be alone." Loved those lines! Welcome to Passions! Susan |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hello and welcome!! enjoyed your writings, and hope to read more of you!  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Colifer, this is a wonderful entree to Passions in Poetry. Your work is insightful and thought-provoking. I'm sure you'll find a comfortable home among us. Do settle in and enjoy sharing your poetry. Welcome to PiP, and check your email for a special greeting...  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
incredible !!! welcome to passions...h |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 As with anything else, that road goes both ways. Welcome to Passions! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
colifer - I adore this Ohh I love this write . . . Welcome to PIP! You fit nicely . . . questioning already good for you! and there's a fine line separating the rest yes indeed *smile* xxoo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This is one mighty fine first post -- I hope you walk the PIP road for a long time. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
colifer... An excellent introductory post here. I enjoyed this very much, and will be looking forward to more from you. Welcome to Passions. ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) This is a wonderful debut, sweet friend, yes, along the path there will be darkness, but we also must carry light with us into the realm so we know exactly why we're taking the path and knowing the Holy Spirit is guiding us! Welcome to Passions, sweet Colifer, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your touching words! I can't wait to read more of your heartfelt poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Colifer, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice...and sad |
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