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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-09-21 01:20 AM



Graphic From Pandoras Box Sigs

~~*~~
You are there
here with me
Hearts so close
forever to be

Thoughts are here
there with you
In my minds eye
a clear view

Apart by distance
together in love
Sent to each other
by wings from above

Though you are there
so far away
You are here with me
always to stay

I hear your voice
here from afar
With love from there
where you are

From the wind
whispering clear
Bringing you from there
with me near

Stars in sky
up above me
Are where you are
for you to see

So my dear Love
just look around
For me with you
will be found

Though away from me
Far apart
Together are we
close in heart

To look around
if we will do
You will see me
I will see you

As you are there
here with me
With love as ours
this will always be

For though I am here
I'm there with you
As you are there
yet here with me, too
~~*~~

12/06/02....Revisited....From A Challenge






© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-09-21 01:22 AM


For though I am here
I'm there with you
As you are there
yet here with me, too


terrific penning of love,,,,

                                    

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2 posted 2003-09-21 01:35 AM


God bless you, sweet Ethel, but by you and your Honey Love being apart so much of the time, it makes for great longing, burning, yearning poetry! lol

Loveya!
Linda

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3 posted 2003-09-21 04:27 AM


beautifully penned for your love!
Nan
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4 posted 2003-09-21 07:13 AM


Here, there, everywhere... and a truly wonderful write as always, Ethel...
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5 posted 2003-09-21 07:37 AM



...Oh, I remember this...
and today?  It was right there,
here, with me!

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-09-21 08:15 AM


Ethel,
A beautiful write.

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7 posted 2003-09-21 09:00 AM


Ethel, now you know I would claim this stanza all to myself:

Apart by distance
together in love
Sent to each other
by wings from above

*smile*
I adore this
xxoo

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8 posted 2003-09-21 09:24 AM


Beautiful penned, which shows your love in every line!

((hugs))
Charisma

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9 posted 2003-09-21 09:33 AM


I remember this Ethel!
Loved it then..love it even more now.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

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10 posted 2003-09-21 10:21 AM


I don't reconize it, but it is lovely.

this echos my friend

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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11 posted 2003-09-21 11:02 AM


I've finally gotten used to the idea that sometimes you simply write me....now I find that you wrote me before we ever met.....

I'm so glad you brought this one back;  I'd have missed it if you hadn't, and now I'm richer.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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12 posted 2003-09-21 11:15 AM


Ethel~

I love this and I love you Ethel..

Susan

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13 posted 2003-09-21 12:47 PM


Reminds me of a challenge we once did here
at PiP....

You write well of your love,  of your
thoughts,  the feelings of separation and
the yearn of return.  

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14 posted 2003-09-21 05:09 PM




(smiles) Oh Ethel, I just love how you continue to re-post this treasure, sweet friend, I remember the challenge so well and I know soon you will be with your sweet Gary and not only will he be there, but also here forever, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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15 posted 2003-09-21 05:48 PM


Hi Ethel, touching words and I hope one day you can be together in the same place.

I enjoyed reading this ....

Hugs, Marti

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16 posted 2003-09-21 08:51 PM


Though away from me
Far apart
Together are we
close in heart

I think I love this more with every reading... I know I'm saving it to read many times more.  *S*

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17 posted 2003-09-27 04:52 PM



"Apart by distance
together in love
Sent to each other
by wings from above"

Ethel...this is so very beautiful...
and I especially love the lines that
I quoted above...

Love this, my friend...
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-27-2003 04:53 PM).]

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18 posted 2003-09-27 05:58 PM


Glenn, thank you so much. I'm glad
that you liked it.
.
Linda, thanks, sweet lady. And may
God bless you, too.  
.
Thank you, Roniece. I'm glad that
you liked it.  
.
Nan, thank you very much for
liking it. I appreciate it.  
.
.
I truly thank and appreciate each one of you.  
Hugs to you all,  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-27-2003 06:00 PM).]

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19 posted 2003-09-27 06:06 PM


Karilea, thanks. I'm glad that it was
right there, here with you....
.
Seymour, thanks for thinking
it's beautiful.  
.
Sue, Thanks. Yes, I know you like
the Angels...me too!!  
.
Thank you so much, Charisma. I'm glad
you think it's pretty.
.
.
I appreciate and thank each of you so much.
Hugs to all of you  
Ethel

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20 posted 2003-09-27 06:13 PM


Nancy, thank you so very much. I'm
glad that you liked it then and now.  
.
Liz, thank you. I'm glad that
you like.
.
Ed, what a nice thing to say. I'm
glad that you can relate, and that
you like the poem. Thank you.
.
Susan, thank you so much for those sweet
words. I love you, too, my friend.  
.
.
Truly, I thank you each and every one and I do really
appreciate all of you, too.  
Hugs to each of you  
Ethel

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21 posted 2003-09-27 06:22 PM


Barry, thank you very much for the reply.
Even your replies have a poetic ring to
them. And, yes, someone brought back a challenge
last December from a while back.
.
Noah, thank you for your kind words. Yes,
sometimes when I miss Gary so much, I just
want to revisit some of my love poems for him.
.
Oh yes, Marti, me too.....me too!! Maybe we will
be together (in the same place) soon, and
never have to part again. Thanks, sweet lady.
.
.
I really thank and appreciate each one of you.
Heart hugs to each of you, too  
Ethel

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22 posted 2003-09-27 06:27 PM


Sweet Suthern Lady, thank you so very much.
That makes me feel good for you to save it.  
.
Vicky, my sweet friend, thank you. I believe
that's my favorite verse, too. I'm so glad
that you liked it.
.
.
I really do thank both of you and I so
appreciate you both, too.  
Hugs to each of you  
Ethel

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23 posted 2003-09-27 07:09 PM


Hello Ethel

Your love was so strong and was so heartfelt and your words were simply beautiful.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

garysgirl
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24 posted 2003-09-27 10:22 PM


Hello, Sue  
Thanks for your nice comments on my poem.
I really appreciate it. Thanks for the beautiful picture, too.
Hugs  
Ethel

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25 posted 2003-10-29 06:50 PM


loved it a lot iam a big of yours keeping this one love reading your poetry
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