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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-09-21 12:28 PM



What is it to be male
that with our failures in life
we redefine success?
Have you ever asked?
I know that you have wondered.
Born without the need
for directions, instructions,
coupled with the unrepentant
yearnings to exceed in our excess,
puzzled by the fear and ignorance
of those who stumble
over what it takes to please a man,
we do sense such
understandings are for time
left to be wasted
by the others,
those who make up the distaff pole
of this bipolar lot.
We are not encumbered
by sense or sensibility,
and as such are not ashamed to be free
to believe and then discount,
by choice,
what is right before our eyes;
I swear to you,
in the tired cracking voice I've earned,
on all that I believe is holy in this life,
that being male can be
simply the greatest state of being free.
Even if locked down
and broken,
with the yang of rage
so far from reach
its name can not be spoken,
a man can shut his mind away
inside himself and facing the abyss
run
toward all that terrorized his every waking thought
corrosively consuming the very fibers of his soul;
yes, run,
with joyful madness gleaming in his eyes,
even if the only choice remaining
is the leap
and the ecstatic glory of the fall.

©2003 by icebox

© Copyright 2003 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
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1 posted 2003-09-21 12:46 PM


you sir, are brilliant
QjQ
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2 posted 2003-09-21 12:48 PM


fabulous,,,

                                    

MorninGlory
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3 posted 2003-09-21 01:01 AM


You have a voice that must be heard, you are an amazing writer, my friend. This overwhelms me -

~ becky

Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2003-09-21 02:53 AM


Wasn't it you that told be before that all I had to do was show up??

lol...

What you write is true...I have seen the stampede...and didn't move quick enough..

Susan

Nan
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5 posted 2003-09-21 07:08 AM


Perhaps by exploring the inner abyss of your icebox mind, I shall gain new insights to that proverbially impalpable place called the male mind... Thankya, kind sir...
Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-09-21 07:35 AM



It's always wonderful to gather in
some perspective...when one wants
to share it.

Thank you, Sir.

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-09-21 08:34 AM


I'm coming back as a man! lol

Have I ever mentioned what a fine writer I believe you to be? Well, I'm saying it now!


EA
~ from the distaff side of the human equation

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-09-21 09:06 AM


Good God icey, you continue to blow me away with what are probably just thoughts that continually pass through that brilliant mind of yours . . .
amazing
xxoo

Martie
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9 posted 2003-09-21 10:37 AM


icebox...you shine a light on the wonder of this unique and interesting gender.
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10 posted 2003-09-21 10:40 AM








.....we got it made.....





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11 posted 2003-09-21 01:05 PM


sigh
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12 posted 2003-09-21 04:50 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Icebox, I too agree with your sentiments and beliefs so well, dearest friend, mankind is definitely tainted with disillusionment and fault, but I guess the beauty in being a man is that we have much of an adventure to discover and realize the faults and each fall we make we grow and that is such a rewarding accomplishment to peel away each layer and discover new truths! (sigh) You are one inspiring poet, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

vlraynes
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13 posted 2003-09-24 04:28 AM



LOL @ Nan...it's worth a shot...

Enjoyed this, icey...a brilliant mind, indeed.

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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