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DawnG
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0 posted 2003-09-20 11:15 PM


This is a poem that I wrote for a dedication that was held today in one of my best friend's memory.
Sarah passed away last December unexpectedly, and she will always remain in my heart.  We had a beautiful day for the dedication and I just know she was smiling brightly down upon all who were gathered.
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Memories of You

A friend’s love cannot be measured
In months or in years
Nor in the amount of laughter shared
During many late night cheers.

A friend’s love is measured
By the special things you did
Sharing your friends, family, and love,
The things that made you, splendid.

Summer camp was where we met
I smile as I look back through the years
Who in the world could ever forget
You, Christy, and I- The Three Musketeers.

Arts and Crafts was our hangout
A place to relax and have fun
Mornings spent laughing and gossiping about
The guys and the hearts they’d won.

We became so much like sisters
Together, yet usually apart
The phone lines daily would purr
As we shared yet another heart to heart.

Special weekends with family
Will always remain in my mind
From sleepovers being sillynilly
To surprise parties from time to time.

Our lives may not have always been easy
Through all my fears you held my hand
Sometimes standing in the shadows
But always there as my best friend.

[This message has been edited by Nan (09-21-2003 07:30 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Dawn - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-09-20 11:24 PM


I share your feelings,,,

                                    

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2 posted 2003-09-20 11:43 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I'm sorry to hear Sarah passed away last year but know always your dear friend will be guiding you from up above with love each day and she'll forever be blessed with your true friendship! (sigh) I send angel comfort hugs your way, sweet friend, yay, I sure hope you post your gorgeous poetry more often as I've missed you so much, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dawn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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3 posted 2003-09-20 11:46 PM


Dawn, I wish that I had had the privilege of knowing Sarah, but you have brought her to all who have heard or read your words.

God bless her--and you...


EA

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4 posted 2003-09-21 04:04 AM


what lovely words for your friend........I'm sure the angels are listening and your friend Sarah is one of them.  
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5 posted 2003-09-21 07:32 AM


Dawn this is a wonderful piece "from the heart"... I thought you had another week before you presented this poem - So I apologize for allowing my own schedule to interfere... But I truly think your words from the heart are perfect just as they are. You were a wonderful friend for her... Nicely done...
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6 posted 2003-09-21 08:15 AM



You know, Dawn, yesterday was an exceptionally
beautiful day here...
now I think I know why!

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-09-21 08:59 AM


Dawn, and a rare thing to find in this harsh world
May she stay close to your heart
she is smiling upon you and this
Beautiful
xxoo

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8 posted 2003-09-21 09:29 AM


Words from the heart you´d penned here, and me think she is smiling at you.

((hugs))
Charisma

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9 posted 2003-09-21 09:39 AM


Dawn, what a beautiful heartfelt write for your friend's dedication.
That kind of friendship is rare..
You wrote this straight from your heart.
Well done.
~Hugs~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

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10 posted 2003-09-21 09:43 AM


DawnG,
A lovely write, enjoyed the read.

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11 posted 2003-09-21 10:28 AM


There is love in friendship, just as there's friendship in love. This is a beautiful tribute, and I have a feeling that just writing it brought you comfort as well as setting the memory even more permanently in your heart.

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12 posted 2003-09-21 10:32 AM


Very true. So sorry to about your friend.
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13 posted 2003-09-21 02:18 PM



What a lovely, heartfelt write for your friend.
I'm sure she is smiling at you.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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14 posted 2003-09-21 02:37 PM


Dawn, this is a beautiful and tender dedication
for your friend. It sounds as if you had a very special
friendship. I'm sure she's watching over you still.  

By the way, I'm with Noah...I would love to see you
posting more. I love your poems. I can feel that they
are written from your heart, and I love that.
Hugs to you, sweet lady  
Ethel

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15 posted 2003-09-21 09:40 PM


Dawn~
Beautiful, tender, poignantly moving~
Such a lovely tribute to your friendship~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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16 posted 2003-09-23 02:27 PM


Dawn, this is truly beautiful. Friendship never dies and leaves many photographs in the heart. A poem to be proud of M'Lady.
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17 posted 2003-09-26 12:13 PM


Dawn, Treasured friendships are always full of memories, and through these memories we grow closer to our friends and others. Even though special people in our lives happen to leave us, they are still alive in our hearts as long as we cherish these memories. You have written a beautiful poem here showing us all how precious Sarah was to you, and I can tell she will always be there with you.

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.



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