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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-09-20 04:34 PM


Empty words become
another empty promise
buy yourself more time

She will see the truth
your dance becomes a mourning
funeral of truth

You will beg again
in weakness for more chances
"one more chance, my love?"

She will know your lies
are gasping for a moment
Get it right this time

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-09-20 07:47 PM



It's not easy...

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21
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Southern Abstentia
2 posted 2003-09-20 07:52 PM


ah the bargaining, the bargaining before...

bottoms up lad

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just out of reach
3 posted 2003-09-20 09:26 PM


Well done Jason. Enjoyed! Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2003-09-21 12:09 PM


At some point they say you already had your last chance...James
Pilgrimage
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Texas, USA
5 posted 2003-09-21 12:26 PM


I enjoyed these, especially the first one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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