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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2003-09-20 08:03 AM


{repost from Open 16}


One call
Could mean my undoing
Leave me breathless,
Constantly cooing
Deliriously serious
About hearing your voice
You've double-dared me
Now I've no choice...

Your number
please?


~Tier



© Copyright 2003 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Gemini
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1 posted 2003-09-20 08:30 AM


Very lovely, seems it happens that way sometimes.  Nice read.
QjQ
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2 posted 2003-09-20 09:48 AM


good read,,,,

                                    

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-09-20 10:35 AM


Wow....this is sooo cool!
Excellent job!

Eric

Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2003-09-20 10:56 AM


Yep, I know this.

Very nice.

Susan

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5 posted 2003-09-20 03:10 PM




(smiles) Oh R.T, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I'm so happy you re-posted this as your words always hold such charm to them! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet R.T, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

wranx
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6 posted 2003-09-22 02:37 PM


Ohhh, That call!

Yes, I know well that call..hehe

Sorry I missed this Tier!

Ed

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