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PouringJewels
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0 posted 2003-09-20 04:25 AM



Blackness surrounded me with no warning
Spiraling my whole being

Any hand, I will grab
To pull me out of this dark hole
I see no color, not even white

Maybe tomorrow
I'll see some grey

© Copyright 2003 Julia - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2003-09-20 04:27 AM


oh my !! how sad! I wish you colours upon sunshine for your day  - be well, be safe, be you!
Goldenrose
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2 posted 2003-09-20 06:08 AM


You are a unique person..i too could not see the colours but now i do..you will see them if you allow your heart to be touched completely by something..try letting the colour into your heart..

Goldenrose.

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-09-20 06:15 AM


oooh Julia . . .

mann to just see grey . . .
I know this and it aches
but you sound positive you
will reach that spectrum
You sure have here with
your writing
*smile*
xxoo

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4 posted 2003-09-20 10:06 AM


Yes....there are times when gray would be such a brilliant, squintingly vibrant color that it seems almost too much to wish for..... I know those times.

Thanks for this.

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Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2003-09-20 11:11 AM


There certainly are times when we all would settle for grey...

Nice job!!

Susan

wranx
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6 posted 2003-09-20 11:29 PM


Ahh, now THIS one I love!

And think you'e gonna like posting your writes here...They've been in your drawer too long.

(And the one you wrote for me? It was wrong of me to forbid you to it. I'm honored you wrote it... Truly! But you know how I am)

Keep writing, you're doing great!

Love,
~Brother

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7 posted 2003-09-21 07:13 PM


Grey would look good right about now. *S*

I like this very much... welcome to Passions!

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-09-23 03:29 AM


I know that color well
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2003-09-23 08:51 AM


Julia~
I have reached for the colors and found them just a heartbeat (or a piece of poetry) away~

This write is vivid~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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vlraynes
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10 posted 2003-09-24 06:25 AM



Julia...
I really like this one.
Very nicely penned, indeed.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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