navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #28 » Boxing Shadows
Open Poetry #28
Post A Reply Post New Topic Boxing Shadows Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Gemini
Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2003-09-20 12:39 PM


Tonight I come here lonely but not alone.
I curse the moon.

I hate that I miss you every day.
I hate that I left you, so much still I wish I could say.

I hate that you let me go, that you threw me away.
I hate that I let you, no fight left in me to warrant me to stay.

I hate that I still think of you every night and day.
I hate that at night I still come to pray.

I hate that I ache, wishing there was another way.
I hate the regrets, the wanting to see you, that someday I may.

I hate that I still box these shadows on the wall.
And hate even more that I love you and you mattered most of all.

© Copyright 2003 June Schultz - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
1 posted 2003-09-20 09:42 AM


expressed your feelings well,,,,

                                    

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
2 posted 2003-09-20 11:47 AM


"I hate that I still box these shadows on the wall."

Loved that line..

I can relate...I talk myself into a bunch of stupid stuff...most of all I hate that I still hold out hope...*sigh*

Susan

Wind
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-09-20 12:47 PM


"and make me a shadowboxer baby,
I wanna be ready for what you do"

ermm...sorry. this is a good poem.

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Gemini
Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA
4 posted 2003-09-22 06:37 PM


QiQ-Thank you for reading and responding.
Gemini
Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA
5 posted 2003-09-22 06:39 PM


S.C. Thank you for relating.
Wind-I appreciate you stopping by, glad you liked.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #28 » Boxing Shadows

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary