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Echoes of One
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Echoes of One |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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Night falls... A smiling moon in mock illuminates the empty of heart Shadows bounce off solitary walls bringing an ache with the lonely of their echoes This night... like those before there is a longing... a desire... Hold me, my love... Embrace me... till morning gifts us with the song of lovebirds in wake While still I dream... ~vlraynes When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-19-2003 11:44 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Embrace me... till morning gifts us with the song of lovebirds in wake fabulous lines to awake to,,, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Vicky, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I feel such yearning in this but if you believe in your dreams, they will come true as good things come to those who wait and dream! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hold me, my love... Embrace me... till morning gifts us with the song of lovebirds in wake While still I dream... Oh, Vicky...how beautiful this is. "the song of lovebirds in wake"......that is just so pretty!! Hugs  Ethel |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleFriend~ You write the echo of the night so tenderly~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hauntingly bittersweet beauty of a write Vickygirl, an ache we all know too well...makes for poetic inspire..yet I wish we could write it as if it was fiction.... you know that I know...yayaya "If you see lonely, clear skies turning stormy ... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky...toughingly heart rendered. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
le sigh... Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A quiet write...now get thee to #29...  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, I really felt this one. You expressed those feelings very well--and very poetically. --but perhaps you may have misinterpreted Lady Luna's smile?  Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
...And through dreams, and passionate longing we conceive beautiful poetry.... enjoyed... hugs, g "Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams [This message has been edited by dgvarner (10-13-2003 08:06 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 For another round of reads for this beauty~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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