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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...


0 posted 09-19-2003 11:42 PM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes



Night falls...

A smiling moon in mock
illuminates the
empty of heart

Shadows bounce off
solitary walls
bringing an ache
with the lonely of
their echoes

This night...
like those before
there is a longing...

a desire...


Hold me, my love...

Embrace me...
till morning gifts us
with the song of
lovebirds in wake

While still I dream...


~vlraynes


When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-19-2003 11:44 PM).]

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1 posted 09-19-2003 11:56 PM       View Profile for QjQ   Email QjQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for QjQ

Embrace me...
till morning gifts us
with the song of
lovebirds in wake


fabulous lines to awake to,,,

                                    

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(sigh) Oh Vicky, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I feel such yearning in this but if you believe in your dreams, they will come true as good things come to those who wait and dream! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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Hold me, my love...

Embrace me...
till morning gifts us
with the song of
lovebirds in wake

While still I dream...

Oh, Vicky...how beautiful this is.
"the song of lovebirds in wake"......that is
just so pretty!!  
Hugs  
Ethel
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4 posted 09-20-2003 07:42 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LittleFriend~
You write the echo of the night so tenderly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com   

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5 posted 09-20-2003 11:53 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

hauntingly bittersweet beauty of a write Vickygirl,
an ache we all know too well...makes for poetic inspire..yet I wish we could write it as if it was fiction....
you know that I know...yayaya

"If you see lonely, clear skies turning stormy ...
Lightning strikes and all you see is blue ... this is me missing you"

JH

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Vicky...toughingly heart rendered.  
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le sigh...

Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously
"Poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese. "
--G. K.Chesterto

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A quiet write...now get thee
to #29...
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Oh, I really felt this one. You expressed those feelings very well--and very poetically.

--but perhaps you may have misinterpreted Lady Luna's smile?  


Linda

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wonderful!
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...And through dreams, and passionate longing we conceive beautiful poetry....

enjoyed...
hugs, g



"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..."  B. Adams

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For another round of reads for this beauty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
       noles1@totcon.com   

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