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Are plans worth making?

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gemjop
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0 posted 09-19-2003 05:41 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for gemjop


Summer came, summer went
you never arrived
so you never left

Underneath
canvas home for a week
sleeping bag rolled into one
we never camped out
you and I

underneath
the black

still black became my heart
wether you were here or not

Do you wonder
if plans are worth making
wishing for warm weather
when winter was better

killing two hurts
with one remedy

beckon winter fire
so I forget the natural heat
I never spent with you.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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1 posted 09-19-2003 06:01 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

this...is exelent flower girl. one of your best

though every one of them is better and better.

the nowhere woman is allways my favorite though

i sympathize with you miss anti-lemon

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Margherita
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2 posted 09-19-2003 06:44 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Highly appreciated!
beckon winter fire
so I forget the natural heat
I never spent with you.


Plan to have plans, always.
Love, Margherita

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3 posted 04-11-2004 09:08 PM       View Profile for aujussy wolf   Email aujussy wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aujussy wolf

gem , sweet poem
i want to keep reading it
passing shadows
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this aches and aches
 
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