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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-09-19 05:41 PM



Summer came, summer went
you never arrived
so you never left

Underneath
canvas home for a week
sleeping bag rolled into one
we never camped out
you and I

underneath
the black

still black became my heart
wether you were here or not

Do you wonder
if plans are worth making
wishing for warm weather
when winter was better

killing two hurts
with one remedy

beckon winter fire
so I forget the natural heat
I never spent with you.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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Wind
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1 posted 2003-09-19 06:01 PM


this...is exelent flower girl. one of your best

though every one of them is better and better.

the nowhere woman is allways my favorite though

i sympathize with you miss anti-lemon

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2003-09-19 06:44 PM


Highly appreciated!
beckon winter fire
so I forget the natural heat
I never spent with you.


Plan to have plans, always.
Love, Margherita


aujussy wolf
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3 posted 2004-04-11 09:08 PM


gem , sweet poem
i want to keep reading it

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-04-15 05:27 AM


this aches and aches
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