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fun_freak
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0 posted 2003-09-19 06:59 AM


Dreams
It's a world of fantasy,
Taking your far from reality,
Every heartfelt wish comes true,
For me and for you.

Loser become winners,
Beggar's, wear the rich men's robe,
Love not felt, felt once more,
Healing wounds which are sore.

Heaven, seems next door,
Lovers not distant anymore,
War's all conquered,
Peace and happiness restored.

Dreams, a little dream my friend,
Suffering and sorrows it will end,
When dusk changes to dawn,
New hope it brought, try to hold on.

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1slick_lady
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1 posted 2003-09-19 07:08 AM


"New hope it brought, try to hold on."

nice thought and welcome to passions

Nan
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2 posted 2003-09-19 08:18 AM


This is a very nice entree to Passions in Poetry.  Welcome to our poetic home.  I'm sure you'll find a comfy corner to settle in and enjoy sharing your poetry with us.

Check your email for a special greeting...

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-09-19 08:43 AM



Welcome to Passions!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

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Gaia
4 posted 2003-09-19 11:07 AM



Welcome to Passions, new friend. And thank you for this lovely dream write!

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5 posted 2003-09-19 01:07 PM


Welcome to Passions. I hope that you enjoy your self here as much as I do. It's a really neat place to be.
Hugs  
Ethel

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6 posted 2003-09-19 01:42 PM


Welcome To Passions
Enjoyed your first post
Have fun here
Chris

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7 posted 2003-09-19 02:12 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is such a gorgeous and uplifting debut, sweet friend, yay, I love it! In our dreans, we can be anybody and go anywhere and do anything and follow our hearts every whichwhere, God Bless You, I love this, and may you always dream sweet dreams! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your gorgeous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

angelblueyes
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8 posted 2003-09-19 02:28 PM


Welcome to Passion's.This was a good first post.I love dreams for they ease the hurt a little.
Crystal

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