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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2003-09-18 10:04 PM




Courtesy of the Red, White, And Maroon
By: Noah Eaton
9/6/02

And they tell you
You are denied to use the flag
And they infer to you
You can't hang it right there
And they reply hastily
"We are just doing our job!"

Yet I see these hypocrites everywhere
Exploiting the flag,
for their own commerical gain,
for their own cold hard cash
On campaign billboards
And used car outlets
And firearm shop windows
And stripper palaces

I try to blind my eyes
To see the softer side
Of this tug-and-warred flag...
No, no, no...

Ladies and gentleman, here's Exhibit A
Let's run a prognosis
Before this diagnosis
becomes another osmosis
As I'm buried in excerpts of John Webster
Trying to call the Robin Redbreast and the Wren
Protecting them from this ravenous wolves
Who usurp the blue into blues time and time again

Stir-fried and deep-woked
Firmaments of truth in polyester sauteed like chop suey
Aten like osso buco
Looks like they've uncovered the wanton wonton
But keep devouring it like ospreys
Before they even realize it...

I try to blind my eyes
To see the softer side
Of this tug-and-warred flag...
No, no, no...
No, no, no...
Objection...
Objection...

Place the flag upon that flagpole
Where it belongs
Upon the Aerie of Liberty
Where everyone can look up
Not down
Where the sunlight can't reflect the colors
Where the wind can't reason
And where every young child
Can smile at its sight
Without having to be ashamed of its desecration

And they tell you
You are denied to use the flag
And they infer to you
You can't hang it right there
And they reply hastily
"We are just doing our job!"

I try to blind my eyes
To see the softer side
Of this tug-and-warred flag...
I try not to watch
This survival of the fittest
Over one tug-and-warred flag...
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NO, NO, NO!!!
No, no, no!
No, no, no!
NO, NO, NO!!!

Hey George Washington, what do you think of the flag now?
Ah, hey George Washington, what do you think of the flag now?

So quit suppressing the origin of these colors
And sell them to all our children...
To those who trust in God
And not behind closed doors and blinds

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I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-18-2003 10:06 PM).]

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-09-18 11:59 PM


Powerful write, you've got here.
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-09-19 12:13 PM



You're a man who speaks his mind and has the strength of his convictions. Powerfully expressed!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

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3 posted 2003-09-19 01:16 AM


Expressed with pride,,,

                                

vlraynes
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4 posted 2003-09-19 01:23 AM



Powerful, indeed.  Wonderfully penned, Noah.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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5 posted 2003-09-19 10:40 AM


Place the flag upon that flagpole
Where it belongs
Upon the Aerie of Liberty
Where everyone can look up
Not down
Where the sunlight can't reflect the colors
Where the wind can't reason
And where every young child
Can smile at its sight
Without having to be ashamed of its desecration


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Exactly.
Personally, I'm not into flags. I find flag waving in general to be devisive rather than uniting humanity.
But if you're going to have any real meaning attached to it, it should be something you can honor and be proud of, and not just another commercial adventure.

angelblueyes
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6 posted 2003-09-19 02:51 PM


I feel this written with power and conviction.
Crystal

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